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Reading Reviews for The Footprints
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by TreacleTart Anistortle

23rd August 2015:
Hi there!

I was scrolling through the newly posted one-shots and I came across this story, so I thought I'd drop by and leave you a review.

I always love stories that involve Hagrid since they're so rare in fanfiction. Since his accent is so hard to write, a lot of people seem to shy away from writing him. I thought you did pretty good with writing his accent. The only little thing that I noticed is that you use the word ain't when he's speaking, but ain't is an American word, so it sounds a bit funny in his speech. Aside from that word though, I thought you did a good job of writing his speech patterns.

I love the ideas that you had about the Anistortle, Anistee, and Bunderbee. The way you described the differences in their footprints was really interesting. I really found myself wanting more description of what these creatures look like.

When I leave a review, I always like to include just a little bit of constructive criticism, so here it goes.

I noticed that there were quite a few typos in this. While I do understand what you are saying, I think that the typos do make this a little harder to read. I would suggest getting what is called a Beta to edit your story. Beta's can be found on the forums or possibly having a friend look this over and edit this.

All in all, I thought this was a lovely little one-shot about an unusual creatures. You have very creative ideas and I hope you'll write more about these creatures someday!

~Kaitlin

Author's Response: Hey Kaitlin!

Sorry to respond so late, life took me away from writing for a bit. I'm sorry about the typos and grammatical mistakes as such... I'm Asian and English is not my first language so I tend to not follow strictly Britain English nor American English. I write for fun but I'll see if I can get someone to review my work.

Thank you so much for the review! It means a lot. Keep reading...

~Riya


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Review #2, by May Anistortle

24th June 2015:
I would love to go in the forbidden forest with hagrid to see some magical creatures

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I'd love to see them magical creatures as well!

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