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Review #1, by Shadowkat How Dumbledore Learnt Mermish

3rd June 2015:
Wow, I can't believe No one else has reviewed this yet! This is a brilliant idea, but why not keep them as oneshots? It would give you more of a chance to be seen, and to receive feedback!

I love how you tied this fact about Dumbledore in with his sister and the regret he felt. It fits perfectly with what we see of him in canon, and I love it! The flashback was handled wonderfully as well.

Just a few small bits constructive criticism.

In a few places it looked like punctuation was left out. The only other thing I spotted was that you repeated some words too close totogether, which interrupted the flow a bit. Besides these two things, it was great. :)

Do you happen to have a forum account? You can probably get more feedback and readers on there, as well as get banners and chapter images for your stories. If you'd like, I could make a chapter image for this. Or, if you decide to separate into oneshots, I could do a banner. If you look at my page you can see some I've done on my stories "Cost of Redemption", "Sirius Black: Escape from Azkaban", and "Only a Dream". Good or bad, a lot of people do get drawn in by a book's cover. That holds true here as well, and a good banner could likely catch people's eyes.

Love this, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing and I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply I've just been on hiatus for a long long while. I did think about making them one-shots and then I decided just to put them all together for an easier life haha xD I'm very bad with grammar so I probably have missed some, I will check it out though when I have time ! I do my forum account is Princes and that sounds fab. Anyway I'm glad you liked it :)

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