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Reading Reviews for Forever Yours
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by FawkesThePhoenix Chapter Three

28th June 2015:
Brilliant as per usual! My only suggestion is that you split up the speeches a little more so as to make it clear. However, this is just my preference and the way you set it out doesn't hinder the story in anyway :) xx

Author's Response: Thank you:) Will keep that in mind:) Glad you are still enjoying it:) xoxo

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Review #2, by FawkesThePhoenix Chapter Two

27th June 2015:
Still loving it! Love how you're involving normal Law with the Wizarding World. Makes it stand out as it's not solely based in the magical world and is focusing on real problems like abuse :) keep going with it xx

Author's Response: Thank you:) Hope to have the 3rd chapter is validated soon so you can enjoy it too:) xoxox

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Review #3, by FawkesThePhoenix Where we were then...

27th June 2015:
Ahhh I really loved this! Love that it's from Hermione's point of view. The funeral and the elegy nearly had me in tears! Can't wait to see where you go with this. Strong start to, what I think, will be a strong story :) xx

Author's Response: Awe, thank you. I have edited both chapters. Would love your opinion. Also waiting on Chapter three to be validated. All three are in waiting actually. Thank you for reviewing. Hope you continue to enjoy it:) xoxo ScarlettTulips:)

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Review #4, by SapphireRose1981 Chapter Two

2nd June 2015:
Oh, nice twist with the actual law work involved. I am liking it a lot more now. Please continue to writ.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading this novel. It will start to get going in the next few chapters. Hope you continue to enjoy it xoxox

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Review #5, by SapphireRose1981 Where we were then...

2nd June 2015:
Nice start. Excited to see where it goes.

Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry for the late reply. I hope you are enjoying it. I am about to post chapter 3:) xoxo

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