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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by poobear Bonding

29th July 2015:
Hi
Wow another top chapter and great story and it seems like it's starting to all be coming together. I very much look forward to the next chapter and lots more to come.
So will say by for now and you take care.
Bruce x

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Review #2, by poobear Will of the Sword

21st July 2015:
Hi Again
Again another great chapter from you i do so love this story and a great read keep up you great writing and so look forward to lots more to come. Hope you have a great week to come by for now till next time.
Bruce x

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews :) The next chapter is posted. Hopefully it'll be up soon. Have a great weekend

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Review #3, by poobear The Sorting

28th June 2015:
Hi There
Yea albus get's his butt kick't , Never realy like't him much but hay ho.
Another top top chapter again for you i'm so getting into this story thank you so much for sharing it with us your great can not wait for the next chapter not long i hope ?. Take care by for now and have a good week to come.
Bruce x

Author's Response: Thank you for liking it :) I am putting up the chapter now and hopefully it will be validated soon

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Review #4, by poobear First Meeting

20th June 2015:
Hi There
Wow top story an top chapter love this story more and more i read it. Keep going you are great and carnt wait for the next chapters to come , Not to long i hope ?. I hope you have a good weekend by for now.
Bruce x

Author's Response: Thank you and the next chapter was just posted. I am working on the seventh one today hopefully it should be finished today or tomorrow at the very latest. Have a great day :)

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Review #5, by poobear Training and Conversations

28th May 2015:
Hi There
Top chapter again from you but must admit it was
heavy reading and a bit hard going(sorry)but all in all good reading keep it up.
Bruce x

Author's Response: Thank you for continually reading and reviewing. The heavy stuff though is just getting started I'm afraid this story has a mind of it's own. Thank you again and please keep enjoying the story and I welcome any opinions. I'm working on the next chapter now :)

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Review #6, by poobear The Beginning

25th May 2015:
O.M.G This is so so very good i'm gaging at the bit now for the next chapter. Oops sorry hi there again my brain got in the way then lol. All i can say is wow what a top chapter and if they are all like this i'm going to be a very happy person indeed. please keep this fab work going that your so very good at indeed. Take care and have a tip top week to come by for now.
Bruce x

Author's Response: Thank you once again for your positive review :) all i can say is that these characters are leading me and I am really enjoying writing it. The fourth chapter will be posted within a day or two so please continue and reviewing. It means a lot to know that someone is enjoying the story. Have a great week :)

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Review #7, by poobear Diagon Alley

21st May 2015:
Hi There
Wow what a great start i love it so different than the norm storys and carnt wait for more to come and love to see were you take this great story please say its going to be a long one ?. Have a tip top week and weekend by for now.
Bruce x

Author's Response: Thank you and yes I plan on it being very long. The characters are making their story known and I am enjoying writing it. The next chapter will be out soon :) Have a great week

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