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Review #1, by Dojh167 An Unexpected Meeting

22nd November 2015:

Oliver/Percy is the best ship ever - thank you so much for writing this, and I hope you continue it, or write more about them elsewhere!

Grammatically, this story could certainly use some work or a bet a reader. You also seem to rush through some of your early physical descriptions, which makes the reader much less grounded in the story.

Haha, I love how you make a point of Percy liking his privacy. And Wood's lack of boundaries is certainly eyebrow-raising!

I had assumed that this was their first encounter of this type, but you say this is the first time they've kissed in months? I really wonder about the history there, especially since Percy is saying he had never considered doing this before.

I wonder what will happen when they see each other in the Common Room or dormitory...

Agh, I need so much more about these guys.

Thanks for writing this!


Author's Response: I'm so glad that I discovered this ship, it's great :D I am definitely writing more, in fact there are two chapters that I need to post still which I have posted on another website.

I have actually fixed most of the grammatical errors I just haven't updated yet (sorry!) I definitely will try to soonish.

This is a prologue and the next chapter will be going back a bit before this encounter occurs so that there can be a bit of a build-up towards their whole relationship. I do technically have two more chapters to post but one I may have to re-write/erase a huge chunk of because it's a little too racy/smutty I think for this website though I haven't fully checked the terms and conditions yet.

Don't worry, more is coming. Glad you like it :)

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Review #2, by Shadowkat An Unexpected Meeting

15th May 2015:
Well...wasn't expecting that! XD

I have to say, definitely not something I've seen before, and definitely not actions I'd expect from Perc...but you made it work. Nice job! :)

Author's Response: Haha thank you very much, I aim to surprise xD !

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