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Review #1, by ad astra the possibility of a beginning

12th June 2015:
House Cup 2015 Review - Slytherin


Do you know what this story is? This is the Yule Ball we all deserve. This is the Yule Ball that could have been, and it's so perfect that I'm just going to pretend the *actual* canon was just some really elaborate headcanon and this is what really happened, where there are queer couples everywhere in a beautiful winter wonderland and especially Dean and Seamus.

I really love the way you've written this as well - one of my favourite things about the Actual Yule Ball is that it's really...kinda...average and as much of a let down as school balls typically are, and there's this sense of "everyone here is having the Most Magical Night of Their Lives and I'm over here bitter and thoroughly underwhelmed" and you've managed to maintain that while still improving pretty much every other aspect of the whole evening. And I love your Alicia and Hermione and the banter and the whole exchange about being enigmatic/trying to be enigmatic. Conversations like those just scream "AW YISS LOOK AT THESE TWO FLIRTING" and i love it

I just love your way of writing starting-out-romances like this - this whole story just gave me the warm fuzzies and I'm so happy to have read it!

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Review #2, by The Summer Snake the possibility of a beginning

16th May 2015:
Greetings from The Summer Snake! I have recently slithered out of hibernation and discovered this amazing place with such amazing stories, so I want to read and review as many as I can before I go back into hibernation!

So, this was a very interesting read. I've never come across Alicia/Hermione before. You definitely did a good job using the Yule Ball scenario here. I enjoyed the interaction between the two girls. It made me smile. The note this ended on was also quite sweet. I liked how their conversation progressed throughout as well.

I liked your characterisations of Alicia and Hermione. They were kinda close to canon and their actions were believable. Your descriptions were very good over all and your narrative had the right balance between description and dialogue. It made for a smooth nice read and I enjoyed it. Here, have some summer cheer - *showers confetti and flowers* Good job!

I'm off to explore more of this wonderful sun! See ya!

With love,
The Summer Snake

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