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Review #1, by TreacleTart Hermione's Dance

20th May 2015:
Hey there!

I just happened to be scrolling through the newest one-shots and this looked interesting, so I thought I'd stop by to read and review.

This was a nice little moment to see from Hermione. In cannon, we don't get much opportunity to see her with her guard down just doing normal things. I thought this filled that in quite nicely.

I also really enjoyed how you dealt with her feelings towards Ron and Krum. You didn't make her overly dramatic (like a lot of fanfiction tends to do). Instead I felt like you did a good job of creating a realistic scenario with realistic reactions. Krum certainly is a good guy and very much sought after and she realizes that she does indeed like him, but you could really feel that there was a spark missing with him based on her thoughts about Ron.

The way you described the hair potion was lovely too. I'm really big on description myself, so I appreciated seeing things about rotten egg smell and shaggy wet dog hair. It made the whole scene much more vivid.

All in all, I think this was a nice, sweet little one-shot about a missing moment in Hermione's story line. Good job!


Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! It made my morning :)

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