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Reading Reviews for Let's Just Be Friends
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Review #1, by jessicalorewrites Kneejerk

26th June 2015:
hey! jess here, reading and reviewing so that I can (finally lol) get the results out for the diversity challenge. the results should be out within the next couple of days so keep your eyes peeled over on the forums!

erin cooper is the type of sassy kind of girl I love! I like that she is a no-nonsense girl who doesn't back down and just agree to things she doesn't want to do. like SURE it would probably be easier for her to just say yes and go on these dates that are propositioned to her but that's not the type of person she is and she would rather be true to herself than lead somebody on.

demisexuality is something I very rarely see in fanfiction so I'm glad you've decided to tackle it. alongside this you've dove straight in to look at the issues faced by demisexual people in that she has all these offers of dates but the only people she has ever fancied have been two of her close friends. I can't tell if she's still friends with these people, but still.. I get the feeling maybe she has a lil crush on june? maybe. or maybe they're just friends *shrugs* who knows. speaking of june, I also like the divergence from hetero with her too and how you touch on the issues she faces, being bisexual. like the threesome question which is infuriating to no end.

one of the assets of this story is not only your characterisation but your dialogue too. I found it really gripping (sometimes I get bored by long dialogue) and very humourous in places, which is the mark of a good writer. even the description was good and it was nice to get a real feel for erin's voice. my favourite bit was about the kneejerk reaction hah what a very literal naming.

- jess, xo

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