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Reading Reviews for Nothing is How it Seems
  
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Mandy Aspen A Closer Look

27th March 2017:
you misspelled "Scorpius", just spell it the way i did. ;)

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Review #2, by victoria_anne A Closer Look

28th March 2016:
Hellooo you lovely wonderful writer!

I can never go past a Scorose. Like, ever.

Er, I'm not falling for Scorpius Malfoy *gulp*

Just kdding - SWOON! I love love love your descriptions of him! Rose and Scorpius sitting in a tree! K-I-S-S-I

Okay, I'll grow up *huff*

I'm pulling this out because it gave me the shivers: "His familyís past has made him a prisoner in his future" - That's beautiful.

I love all the details Rose notices about him! It's so cute and sweet! I really hope you consider expanding on this, you write Scorose really well!

By the way, HPFF has a fundraiser going at the moment, and I'd love if you could help out by donating and keeping the magic of this site alive so I have the chance to see what else you can write!

♥ Bianca

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Review #3, by Frankie05 A Closer Look

31st August 2015:
Hey there, I decided to show your one shot some love :)

It is actually well written for such a short piece and you do a great job describing Scorpius and I think you even see into who he is while leaving some to the imagination of the reader. The first half of the story when you are describing him doesn't seem like it is coming from Rose but the second half does. It doesn't take away from the story but I think adds to it. Is she just another girl who falls for the looks of the handsomest boy on campus.
I think (in my head) Rose may be as perceptive as her mother therefore making it so that she can see in his eyes his turmoil that you described that she sees but no one else can. And she is probably extremely curious too (growing up in the Wotter clan) so following him one day doesn't seem that out of the ordinary to me. Although the end was a bit ubrupt. Just like boom. I'm in love with Scorpius. Okay. Left field.

But all in all this story was good! Yo should consider writing more!

Frankie

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for such a detailed review! I really appreciate you taking the time out to give me some feedback :) The piece came from the perspective of a girl who had been watching a boy with whom she had liked for quite a while, but I think due to the nature of the perspective it was probably a bit much for her to say she loved him at that point! Thank you again for the review and I'm currently (attempting) to write something else a bit longer! :)

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Review #4, by killjoy A Closer Look

26th March 2015:
I liked it, but you should do more lol

Author's Response: Thank you for your review :) I do agree it was quite short. That piece was my first one and I thought I'd test the waters out a bit before I tried to attempt something longer :)

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