5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by The Summer Snake chapter 1

27th May 2015:
Greetings from The Summer Snake! I have recently slithered out of hibernation and discovered this amazing place with such amazing stories, so I want to read and review as many as I can before I go back into hibernation!

Haha this was a funny little story. Now I'm just a little reptilian creature so I don't know much about the human world - you know us animals just mate with whoever we want to (I think we do at least). So this story really could have me chuckle - if I could chuckle. I am a snake so it's more like a hiss.

Anyway, on to the point, I enjoyed reading this. Your writing had a nice comedic touch but wasn't glaringly over the top. The whole concept was pretty amusing. Ginny's and Draco's reactions were kinda funny. The ending just made me laugh (you know if I could have laughed). Your characterisations of Harry and Ron were adorable.

All in all good job! Made for a nice light-hearted little read xD

*showers confetti and flowers* Have a nice summer!

Now I'll be off to explore more of this wonderful sun! See ya!

With love,
The Summer Snake

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Review #2, by proud-pied April chapter 1

29th March 2015:
The acronym-inception concept fires
The mind to newly-formed eccentric flights
Of fancy, and of whimsy Im inspired!
Although it seems these boys are none too bright.
But Ron and Harrys inadvertent gaffes,
Have made this rainy proud-pied April laugh.

So happily Ill leave these iambs here,
In hope that it returns some Easter cheer.

Author's Response: Excellent work! Whoever your secret identity is, know that I am impressed. Well played!

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Review #3, by krazyboutharryginny chapter 1

19th March 2015:
Omg... I'm totally cracking up. I lost it at Dumbledore nodding knowingly, and laughed even harder at Malfoy being all abashed at being called homophobic. Too funny!
Poor Ron and Harry... they'll never be able to convince everyone now!
I know this is a joke story, but I'm actually bizarrely interested... Like, where did WARLP come from and why did Hermione found it? And a Hogwarts school newspaper! That's such a funny and cool idea... someone could come up with a really interesting novella around that concept, probably.
Thanks for writing this, it made me laugh. :)
-Kayla (for the HPFF review challenge)

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review!

Dumbledore being Dumbledore just loves to drop subtle hints, and perhaps Malfoy may be starting to learn some self-awareness?

If somebody wanted to write a serious story about the founding of WARLP or the school newspaper, I would be happy to read it!

Go Gryffies!

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Review #4, by chinaglaze chapter 1

18th March 2015:
Ha ha! this was blimmin' hilarious. Carry On Wizarding, double entendres abound! Not that there's anything wrong with that. 10/10 More please!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed it!

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Review #5, by flyhigh__ chapter 1

15th March 2015:
Review tag!

This story certainly put a smile on my face... not that there's anything wrong with that. (Sorry 'bout the bad joke, but there's nothing wrong with jokes!)

Poor Harry, Ron interrupting his date like that! It's good to know that Sharon accepts LGBTQA people, though (although ruining Harry's chance with her in the process).

I just realized that this story is adapted after 'The Outing' , as you said above, but sadly, I've never watched that episode. I'll probably go and watch it now :)

It's quite nice to know that Draco got owned :)

I really love your sense of humor, including acronym inception !

Rach ☼

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

I'm a big Seinfeld fan and this was a pretty hilarious episode that gave us the famous "not that there's anything wrong with that" catch phrase. I highly recommend watching it:)

Any day Malfoy gets owned is a good day for me:)

thanks again for the review!

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