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Review #1, by tangledconstellations A Jealous Heart

19th March 2015:

I'm reviewing for the HPFF fundraiser on the forums :)

So, I decided to read this because I've been trying to read a lot more canon and trio-oriented stories, and I thought this was really cool! Once I realised it was central to GOF I was so in to it and in a way I wish it was a bit more than a one shot! I've always wondered about the Goblet of Fire from Ron's point of view, because his and Harry's fall-out is so dramatic and I wish I could see into Ron's head too!

But then, the twist at the end - poor Ron! I hope Harry and Hermione weren't *really* looking at each other like that, but I can totally understand why Ron would get upset over something like that. Especially as he's already feeling so pushed out and small. But - he's sort of starting to understand he loves her, right?! :D which is the silver lining! Even though I wonder whether he would admit that to himself at all at this point...

I do just get the feeling that this needs to be carried on a little bit more. Not just because I want it to (but I do want it to, hehe!) but because it feels as though Ron's feelings need to be wrapped up a little bit more. I don't know. What do you think? Haha!

But other than that, this was really great. It's refreshing to be in Ron's head for a while! :D

Laura xxx

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