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Review #1, by long_live_luna_bellatrix Chapter One: A Special Request

17th March 2015:
HI there. I'm stopping by to review for the HPFF fundraiser.

I have to say, I am really hooked. It never occurred to me that Harry's life might have taken a different turn if someone as kind and loyal as McGonagall was his introduction to the wizarding world. And you've convinced me that it's a situation worth looking into. The writing here was solid; I feel like I have a good grasp on your McGonagall, and I completely understand her reasoning. I like the idea that she's been meaning to go see Harry for awhile, but some behind the scenes work on Albus's part has prevented her from doing so. I also really like the idea of her relationship with Septima Vector.

All in all, this was a lovely first chapter. My interest is piqued, and I can't wait to see what Septima's report inspires in McGonagall! The fury of Minerva isn't to be underestimated, after all. Then again, she clearly has no idea of Dumbledore's plan to literally protect Harry with the bloodline of his mother, so it will be interesting to see how that turns out.

Best of luck with this, and I'll be looking out for future chapters!


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