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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Dinthemidwest Destiny

2nd September 2016:
Ha! But where will the story go from here; that is the question?? Love this piece-it could go in any direction! Your is skillfully told!

Author's Response: That is the question ;)
Thank you. I do really like this one! :)


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Review #2, by Aleine Destiny

20th May 2015:
I must admit, I'm not really familiar with Teresa. As in, I've not read much stories of her. So this was a big eye-opener. The best outcome of me reading this story was that it made me think about the time that Sirius was locked up in the house. I've never really thought about it in detail. I've always thought about his death and how it could have been prevented, but never this.

I'm so going to start plotting stories in this setting.

(Oh and, by the way, you love Gloria Estefan too? Yay)

Anyway, getting back to the story, I love how you've taken such a small incident and made it into a short story. That is so creative and imaginative of you.

Also, I love how you're saying so much in so little. You managed to incorporate the Order of the Phoenix atmosphere just by introducing Hermione, Ginny and Molly in that tiny scene. You didn't waste any space in the story, but it didn't get us lost either.

And I love how real their passion is...

The only downside I saw was that there were some typos. But no biggie.

I look forward to reading the rest of your stories :D

Author's Response: Awww thank you for reviewing :D

It makes me sad to think of Sirius locked up when he was innocent but thinking he deserved it because he wasn't secret keeper.

I love Gloria Estefan!! I hadn't listened to her in ages and this song came on and the story pretty much popped into my head because the words seemed so appropriate (especially because of one particular story)

I know I'm shocking for typos :/

Thanks so much for your lovely review!! It's made my day! xxx


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Review #3, by toomanycurls Destiny

19th May 2015:
I love stories where Sirius is married!!! love love love

Ah! Of course this broke my heart a little. I thought things would go amiss when Sirius *thought* she felt the same. :'( It's so painul to see the love lost between them but it makes sense that Terese would be confused. It's especially sad as she was Sirius' bright spot that got him through Azkaban. It really wouldn't be reasonable for her to wait though - not for a convicted mass murderer. I do like that Remus has a happy relationship with someone through all this - he so rarely gets a nice love story. It feels very fitting that Molly would not like people stepping out of their relationships, even if it's only emotionally. Considering the AU and OC tags on this, you really did a great job making this a moving piece!

Thanks for swapping!

-Rose

Author's Response: I love the idea of Sirius being married too. I thought it was so sad that he never had the opportunity. It really is a complicated situation! Perhaps more complicated than is shown here... And Molly would be disapproving, bless her!! Thank you so much, I'm really really happy you enjoyed it!

Sophie xx


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Review #4, by Lady Luck Destiny

19th April 2015:
Hi *waves*

I'm Lady Luck. My friend from the forums have seen you around there. She had wanted to come by and read and review something of yours, but for safety reasons - she is running from the evil king of Westeros - she couldn't show up here. So I thought I could do it for her, and that is why I am here.

A lot of people don't actually know this, but I am familiar with Sirius Black. You see, I'm the Lady of luck, which means I'm the one that spreads it around. Many years ago, I decided that Sirius Black was not going to get some of my luck, and he was therefore imprisoned for a crime he didn't commit. My friend over at the forums was furious with me for doing such a thing, but I must admit I did not regret it. At the time I did what I thought was right, and Sirius Black had been nothing but mean to me when I was a student at Hogwarts. So he had it coming!

Anyway, my friend would've loved this story. You see, Sirius is her favourite character, and she loves all stories featuring him. I find myself liking him more and more, now that he seems to have matured into a good and non-bullying man, but I can't say I've read many stories where he is married. That was welcoming change, I must say.

I like that Tess really doesn't where she stands with Sirius anymore, because she's believed he betrayed their friends - James and Lily - for so many years (still not sorry about that one). And now she knows that is not true, but it's been so long that it is hard to go back to how they once were. I think that was very believable. It can't be easy to know that you've been wrong about your husband for so long, but at the same time things have changed after so many years. And they're not the same people that once fell in love. So yeah. I really liked that.

The whole dancing moment was very beautiful. I've never heard the song before, but I think I might check it out. But anyway, I think it fit well to the story, so I really liked it. And since you're story has changed my views on Sirius Black, I will give him some of my luck so he might be able to find love again with Tess (or someone else of his choosing). I do hope he still behaves nicely, or I will make him a very unlucky man again. Mark my words!

But I'm afraid I have to go now. Lady Luck is a very busy woman, you see, and I have many people to make lucky. In fact, I'll give you some luck right now *throws lucky glitter on marauder lady*. I hope you will say hi to my friend over at the forums if you meet her. I can't tell you her name, because, as I said earlier, she is on the run from the evil king of Westeros. But she told me to give you this clue, that will lead you to her:

Your clue:

Not a bird, not a plane
I'm not Lucy in the sky
Am I close to the kitchen?
Yes, but do you know why?

Hope this will be of any help, and may you be very, very lucky for the rest of your life.

Yours Sincerely

Lady Luck

Author's Response: *waves at Lady Luck* Hello, and thank you for making my day!!! That is very lucky indeed. Poor Sirius is generally very unlucky (except perhaps in a couple of my au fics...) and I thought introducing a character that would be left behind would be interesting!
The song is the title track from Gloria Estefan's 'Destiny' album; it just seemed to fit somehow, and I had a clear mental image of them dancing!!
This is literally one of the best reviews ever :D Thank you, and I really do need the lucky glitter!!! And once I figure out the clue, I most certainly will say hello to your friend :) x


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