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Reading Reviews for Abandoned Blade
  
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Panacea The Hogwarts Express

22nd April 2015:
Harry so would've hexed Goyle before Draco got in there!

Author's Response: That is a good point but (without trying to give anything away) it was important for the story that Draco pulled Goyle off

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Review #2, by Panacea New Friends and Whiskey Bottles

22nd April 2015:
Very cool idea! I like the character Blade

Author's Response: Thanks very much :)

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Review #3, by fautedemieux The Hogwarts Express

27th March 2015:
I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Ahaha thanks :) Recently took a break but I'm planning to continue the story soon ;)

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Review #4, by Veritaserum27  The Circus

19th March 2015:
Hello!

I was looking through the recently added stories and I saw this one didn't have a lot of reviews so I thought I'd stop by and leave one :)

And I'm so glad I did! What a great start you've got here! I wasn't sure where this was going in the beginning, but you did a great job describing the real happenings behind the scenes of the circus. It's a hard life -especially for an orphan like Rose. I must admit that I originally thought the narrator was male, but I was wrong! This makes the story even better. She's got to be tough as nails to deal with this crew. I also liked the little subtle way you showed us that she was magic by the flowers opening. - She doesn't know it yet, but we do.

Ooo - a kidnapping! Yikes - I wonder if there's more to the story about her parents. Great start!

Also - I'm also leaving this review in support of the HPFF Fundraiser. I'm sure you noticed there's one going on to help HPFF stay online. You should check it out!

♥ Beth (Veritaserum27)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It was nice to hear your thoughts on the first chapter :) I will check out the HPFF Fundraiser too ;)

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Review #5, by fautedemieux  The Circus

1st March 2015:
Very interesting! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 2 was just validated! :)

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