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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by tangledconstellations Falling Apart

19th March 2015:
Hey there,

I'm reviewing for the HPFF fundraiser over on the forums :)

You've really got me interested in this story with just this quite short introduction. I'm so curious about Hermione's torturing - I think it's because she's normally such a strong character it's heartbreaking and sort of inconceivable that she would be so majorly affected by it. It makes sense that she would be though, because it's such a horrible thing to have happened to her.

Once she's woken up from her nightmare its absolutely clear that she's not okay. You've made that really clear from your writing, and I think the last line in particular is great. It really packs a punch. I don't think we've ever really seen Hermione in a moment of weakness, and having you show it to us like this here just makes me want to find out whether she'll get out of it all okay. While short, this first chapter was certainly gripping, and it'll be great to see where you're going to take this story once you've updated :)

Laura xxx

Author's Response: Hello, it's great that people seem to be enjoying this story so far, even though it's quite short.

My original idea had been to have the standard, Draco comforting Hermione after she had a nightmare and having them randomly fall in love but I definitely have a different approach in mind now.

I was even wondering about throwing some Harry/Hermione action in there...

Thank you for leaving such a nice review, it really made my day :)

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Review #2, by Dramionelover2014 Falling Apart

16th March 2015:
I love this story so far please keep writing.

Author's Response: I have a bad case of writers block at the minute but as soon as inspiration strikes, you try and stop me writing more chapters! Thanks for reviewing, it means alot! :)

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