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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by EnigmaticEyes16 Mistletoe Kisses

6th August 2015:
Hi Tammi! Just stopping by to leave you a review and say thank you for all your help with the HC this year! You wrote so many stories! It's practically insane how many!

Anyway, I loved this little one-shot! Now I want to go off and read what else you've written of this couple because that was just adorable! I wish there was more to this story, like what Rose's reaction was to Hugo's confession, and what happened next between Hugo and Scorpius!

But really this was great! I enjoyed reading Scorpius being all snarky over his bad day and hating on all the "idiots" in Hogwarts. And I thought it was funny that he's kind of afraid of Rose's wrath. But the fact that he'd run into his crush along the way and be forced to kiss said crush was just amazing and adorable. I thought Hugo's reaction was just perfect, going from shock, to wonder, to happy. And the way he told off Rose all nonchalant was just perfect!

I want to read more of them so badly now!

Great one-shot, Tammi!

xxNix

Author's Response: NIX!! Aw thank you so much! I have no idea how I wrote so many stories haha.

I loved writing this one, it made me so happy haha. I've written a few things about them, and am planning a lot more. Maybe I'll do a second chapter of Rose's reaction and what happens next?

I love Snarky Scorpius, it's my favourite thing haha. Haha Hugo always tells Rose how it is :P

Thank you so much! I shall have to write more!


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Review #2, by Unicorn_Charm Mistletoe Kisses

10th March 2015:
Hi there! Here for our swap! :)

Oh this was just the cutest story ever! I was seriously smiling like a fool the entire time. Even thought poor Scorpius was having quite a horrible day, I couldn't help but chuckle while thing after thing went wrong on him.

I love how you started this with him oversleeping, because doesn't usually seem like when you wake up later, your whole day turns out horribly? It's such a weird phenomenon.

I thought you did such a fantastic job showing his frustration with everything going wrong, too. From the way you described what was not left at breakfast, even down to the crumb filled butter, the crowded hallways, the knuckle scraping and then torn robes. His patience quota for the day was definitely filled by the point he ran into Hugo, which really came across well. I laughed out loud at the "idiot parade," line. That was too, too funny. :D

Aww and then we got to the part with them both being stuck under the mistletoe! That was just the cutest, sweetest thing ever! The fact that he had slipped and said that Rose wasn't the Weasley he had a crush on! I would have died of embarrassment if that were me! But kudos to him for just biting the bullet and kissing me. I was like, "Yeah! Go Scorpius!" and doing a little cheerleader dance.

The ending of this was just perfect. I could clearly see Hugo walking by, all casual like and telling his sister than they were both just kissing. And the wink and him blowing a kiss were amazing.

I absolutely adored this one-shot. It was so sweet, cute, funny and just gah! Excellent job on this!! Thank you so much for doing the swap with me!! ♥

xoxo Meg

Author's Response: Hello! I'm so glad that we decided to do a swap. :D

I agree though, poor Scorpius. Everything was just going for him.

And I agree, over sleeping just ruins the rest of the day. I agree, it is weird.

Aww thank you so much, poor Scorpius was just having everything go wrong. Haha there was of course an idiot parade. :P

Yep, I had to include them stuck under mistletoe. Everyone needs to be stuck under it with their crush! It's more entertaining. :P

Scorpius just had enough by then and he needed to just leave, so kissing Hugo was the only way out of there. :D I was cheering for him too! *joins in the cheerleader dance*

Thank you so so much for this amazing review! I loved it so much. Thank you for doing the swap with me! I loved it so much. :D


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Review #3, by Aphoride Mistletoe Kisses

14th February 2015:
Hey there! :) Happy Valentine's Day, or Singles Appreciation Day if you're single ;)

So I couldn't resist stopping here, because I just read a pretty dark story and a good bit of fluff after something dark is always great! ;)

I love the way you set this up, you know. The idea of enchanted mistletoe is so brilliant, but can end up cliche, you know, so I love how this really isn't a conventional mistletoe story, with how it happens and all that kind of stuff.

Scorpius is such a great character, too. I love how he's so nervous about coming into contact with Hugo and being stuck under the mistletoe with him; it's incredibly sweet, and so true to life, too. I mean, anyone who's ever had a crush on someone knows how awkward it would be to have that happen to them... And I love as well how terrified he is of Rose, haha, she seems properly scary - the older sister I've always tried to be :P

Hugo is so cute, too! I love how after Scorpius kisses him, he's still stuck there, with his hand on his mouth like he just can't believe it - it's so sweet! :) I love as well his comment to Rose about why Scorpius was late to the prefects' meeting, how he was kissing him instead - though I can't help but feel a little bit sorry for Scorpius about that one, I imagine Rose will be reading him the riot act about dating/kissing her little brother afterwards :P

Your writing is so great, too! It really feels like a teenager is talking, you know - the voice of Scorpius is amazing and so good! Your description is so lovely, and the details in this are so gorgeous, too, with the mentions of Albus and Fred and how terrible Scorpius' day had been (haha, I loved the 'it's not teenage melodrama' thing too :P), with the bad breakfast foods and so on.

This is a lovely, lovely one-shot! I'm so glad I read it! :)

Aph xx

Author's Response: HELLO!!! Awww thank you! Happy valentines day to you too!! :D

I'm so glad that you picked my story to read to cheer you up after reading something dark.

Thank you! I wanted to use the cliche of mistletoe, but put my own spin on it. I'm glad that you love what I had done.

Scorpius has such a crush on Hugo, he's so adorable haha, I should write more of them either before this or after? Oh Scorpius is so terrified of Rose, I think most people are.

Hugo is struck dumb for a moment when he gets kissed. He doesn't know how to react because he's fancied Scorpius for a while himself. :D Oh yes! Rose is totally going to read him the riot act! :P Hugo has landed Scorpius right in it.

Aw thank you so so much! You are amazing for saying such wonderfully kind things. You've made my entire life!

Thank you so much Aph!!! xxx


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Review #4, by wolfgirl17 Mistletoe Kisses

13th February 2015:
Hello!

Argh! This one-shot was so cute! Totally
adorable to see Scorp so flustered. I'd never
read a Scop/Hugo fic before but this one was so
fluffy and cute that I want more!

Lovely and wonderful!

xx-Ellie (wolfgirl)

Author's Response: Hey Ellie! :D I'm so glad that you liked this one shot :D I had so much fun writing it :D

I really want to write more about them, so I might be convinced to write a short story on them.

Aww you're lovely and wonderful, Ellie! :D


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Review #5, by TreacleTart Mistletoe Kisses

12th February 2015:
Hi there,

TreacleTart here with the review you requested
on earlier on the forums.

So I thought this was cute little story. I like
the way you brought them together. I thought
using the secret passages was clever.

Your characterization of Scorpius was
interesting. You could definitely see that
Malfoy attitude when he was shoving his way
through the crowds, but it was nice to see that
he has a sweet, shy side as well.

I also enjoyed that Hugo was so sassy. I can't
believe he told his sister that he was snogging
Scorpius!

I did notice a few grammar related issues.

You have a lot of run-on sentences in the
story. If you get a chance to edit this, go
through and break some of them up a bit. For
example "Scorpius wished that they would all
bugger off outside into the snow so that he
could get places undisturbed, he didnít care if
it was December and freezing outside, they
should have thought of that before they came to
a school in Scotland" should be "Scorpius
wished that they would all bugger off so that
he could get places undisturbed. He didn't
care if it was December and freezing outside.
They should have thought of that before they
came to school in Scotland."


In one part you wrote "see the cogs whirling in
Hugoís hand as he tried to think". I'm assuming
you meant to type the word head.

There were a few other small spelling and
grammar mistakes that could be fixed, but
nothing that really detracted from the story in
a major way.

Overall, I thought it was a nice one-shot.

~TreacleTart

Author's Response: HEYA!!

Thank you for your amazing kind words! I'm so glad that you thought that it was cute. :D

Ahhh thank you! I shall go through and sort those out. I have a tendency to write something, skim through it and just send it out into the HPFF world without checking it. :P I really need to stop doing that.

I love writing Hugo as very outspoken and the kind of guy that people tend to avoid because he looks scary. And I love writing Scorpius as nicer then Draco would be :P

Thank you so much hun! I shall go and look back over the story when I get the time too


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Review #6, by banshee Mistletoe Kisses

12th February 2015:
Ah, This is so exciting! I love this ship so much from the series and I love seeing them at a younger age!

Oh my god, I'm laughing so much at the breakfast descriptions. Sad day for Scorpius! (I bet it'll be better sooon.)

idiot day parade - aw, Scorpius, we all have those days. hahah

Aw, Scorpius has a little crush and he doesn't want to admit it to Hugo! That's so adorable! Knowing where they eventually get to, it makes me want to read a story of that night from Scorpius' point of view... Of him remembering his little crush and getting together with Hugo. (hint hint)

Their bickering was so adorable, and the kiss was PERFECT. It was so wonderfully imperfectly perfect and it makes me love them that much more.

Maybe he should make it his mission? - Oh no, shipping this x894759348 now.

THIS WAS SO CUTE. I can't stop smiling for real. alkdjf. I want all of the Scorpius/Hugo moments now!

YOU'RE WONDERFUL THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!


Julie

Author's Response: I'm so excited that you're excited!! I need to write more and more Hugo/Scorpius because I love them so much! Especially when Hugo is scary Hugo :D

Haha poor Scorpius wanted to have a breakfast, maybe he can have a better lunch?

He does have a crush! He's had it for a while, bless him! I can just picture him staring at Hugo from afar :P Hahahah I'd have to write it!

I CAN'T STOP SMILING EITHER!!! BECAUSE OF YOUR AWESOME REVIEW!! THank you!!! :D


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Review #7, by TheHeirOfSlytherin Mistletoe Kisses

12th February 2015:
Oh, this more than makes up for the sadness with George. Smiling like an idiot and totally not caring. BECAUSE HUGO/SCORPIUS IS LOVE!!!

Poor Scorpius, having to run around the castle because of Rose's meeting. How dared to take his breakfast? He should set Hugo on them. He probably can now. ;)

I agree with Scorpius. It's like people just know when you're late and go slower just to hurt you. I'd have pushed them, too.

HUGO!

ALL THE LOVE IN THE WORLD, THEY TOTALLY LOVE EACH OTHER. LOOK AT HUGO SMILING. SCORPIUS SHOULD HAVE HIM SMILE ALWAYS.

Haha! I loved the end. It was great!

This was so lovely!

Sam.

Author's Response: Aww yay! I'm so glad that it made up for the sadness. HUGO/SCORPIUS IS TOTALLY LOVE!!! I LOVE THEM!!

I know! He doesn't get any rest, and he's having such a bad day bless him! The people who take his breakfast should be set upon by Hugo!

Haha THEY DO TOTALLY LOVE EACH OTHER!!! THE LOVE IS STRONG AND PURE!

Thank you so much Sam!!!


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