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Reading Reviews for A Different Marauders Tale
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Review #1, by Ash The first day of mischief

2nd March 2015:
I like the premise of the story. I think the main character will be interesting, but the story feels rushed. As I read it just seems like an endless string of "and then we" and "next we". I'd like to see a full scene, maybe increase some more dialog. Interesting though! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I agree it is a bit rushed, and I'm working on fixing it. It's a bit difficult writing at an eleven year olds perspective, and I find I'd rather be writing them older, but the story kind of needs the build up. Thanks again for the feedback! :)

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