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Reading Reviews for My Australian Princess
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ArtsyTigs Wondering around for the right las'

21st March 2015:
I like it! Well done. Sweet and short.

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Review #2, by InkStainedFingers Wondering around for the right las'

19th March 2015:
(Review left in support of the HPFF fundraiser)

I really liked this, though I don't typically read much Draco/Hermione. I think it's a nice story, with a real sense of affection developed between Draco and Hermione. It's always hard to make dialogue feel natural, but you definitely manage this well. I also like the relationship between the pair, and how it is a 'almost-might-not-have-been'. I think you gave a good sense of how the characters have developed in character and in love - I like how Hermione seems to have relaxed quite a bit.

However, I did notice a few grammatical and spelling errors through the chapter. In my opinion, a few capital letters and commas can make a lot of difference, and can really help to polish an improve your story. I think that writing numbers as words ('seven' instead of '7' for example) gives a nicer feel as well, but that might be a matter of personal opinion.

I did really enjoy reading this story, and I would be interested in reading more about your take on this pairing, especially Hermione, who seems very interesting.

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