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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by matthew The Mountain Troll

18th September 2015:
Really enjoying this so far!

Author's Response: I'm glad! Thanks for reviewing.

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Review #2, by Ohpl Quirrell

18th February 2015:
I really enjoyed your story.You write very well and your characters are crisp and well thought out.I will be watching out for your new story.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm very glad you liked the first story. The characters will develop more in the next stories.

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Review #3, by kayt Pansy's Birthday Party

9th February 2015:
Don't know why there aren't a few more reviews for this - it deserves more! You answered the question I was going to ask as to how long the story would be. This was an interesting chapter, finding out a bit about the other Slytherin first years, and there were lots of nice original touches. Looking forward to the next instalment.

Author's Response: The first stories will be quite short, but as Harry grows older, the stories will be considerably longer.

I used this chapter to introduce some of the characters that we hadn't seen much about yet. Some of these will play a more significant part in the future. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #4, by kayt Christmas at Hogwarts

9th February 2015:
Another enjoyable chapter. Its clever how you manage to make the main events of the book fit seamlessly into your story with only a little spin.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm very glad you like the story.

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Review #5, by kayt Detention and Quidditch

5th February 2015:
'To keep the dragon alive' LOL. Nice to see Snape clearing the air a little, and you did a good job showing Harry's new enthusiasm for Quidditch.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews. I really appreciate it.

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Review #6, by kayt The Mountain Troll

5th February 2015:
I'm rather liking this retelling of the story. The small differences are working well, and I do like how you are portraying Snape. Harry in Slytherin is always good for a change, and although I don't think he truly belongs in that house its interesting to see what happens.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the story! I try to keep everyone in character as much as possible, despite the fact that I don't really follow cannon. I think Snape is one of the most interesting characters to write, definitely in this kind of story. Thanks for reviewing!

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