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Reading Reviews for The Night of His Life
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Josie The Yule Ball

9th July 2016:
I really liked it... It was sweet :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm considering a sequel focused around the second task featuring these two!
~MadiMalfoy x

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Review #2, by LilyPotterEvans1976 The Yule Ball

3rd October 2015:
I like it, but I want more, hehe I love how you've described Harry's nervousness. 10/10 xxx

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm considering writing two companion pieces to follow the other two tasks of the Triwizard Tournament so you just might get some more! Thanks for the review! :)
~MadiMalfoy x

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Review #3, by Sinhav The Yule Ball

9th May 2015:
Hey nice story. Please continue

Author's Response: Hi there! This is unfortunately only a one-shot but I think you'll be happy to know that I've got another Harry/Hermione one-shot in the works right now that should be posted fairly soon! Thanks for the review! :)

~MadiMalfoy x

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Review #4, by The Basilisk The Yule Ball

29th March 2015:
Hello. It is I, The Basilisssk. Ahh this was too sssweet. I absolutely loved it. I am a little biased towardsss Harry/Hermione anyway so I'm glad I stumbled upon this little ssstory.

You wrote thisss cute Harry/Hermione fluff really sssweetly and I liked how this was set during the Yule Ball - and Harry already had a crush on her. The way he told her she looked beautiful was adorable and the ending put a smile on my face. Of courssse you wouldn't know it since you can't recognise when I smile being a human.

All in all, thisss was a cute little one-shot and I'm glad I read it. Sometimes, you need something light and sweet to read, something innocent and subtle, essspecially when a dark soul like mine is usually drawn to dark stories. Good work little Ravenclaw =)

Hiss Hiss,
The Basilisk

Author's Response: Hello again, Basilisk!

I was extremely excited when I got this prompt! Harry/Hermione was a ship I'd been itching to try but I didn't know how to go about it, so this provided the perfect avenue for me to dip my toes in. I figured that since they were only fourteen and very awkward, I wouldn't have them do anything preposterous. Also, I wanted to see how smoothly I could insert it into canon events --in the books Harry stumbles on Hermione crying and yelling at Ron after the Ball, so I figured why not have Harry find Hermione a little earlier on and then it would continue on later. I'm slowly allowing myself to write more fluff, but it's hard! :P

Thank you for the kind review! :)
~MadiMalfoy x

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Review #5, by poobear The Yule Ball

8th January 2015:
Hi There
I like't this story greatly i do wish jkr put them together instead iam not a great fan of ron or the others i think thay just use harry for a means to an end (prob going to hell for saying that lol) but harry and mione just seem better together. I hope you do more of the pairing and a longer story with them in it. I know its been done before but i do like reading them kind of storys and lots of ron bashing (again hell lol)
Well anyway it was a good short story thankyou keep up the good writing take care.

Author's Response: Hi! :)

Thanks for taking the time to review this! With all respect to JK, I would have to agree that Hermione sort of settled for Ron when she could've had someone with a little bit more intelligence and less of an inferiority complex. Nevertheless, I still absolutely love Harry/Ginny, but this pairing is something I've been itching to try my hand at so I'm very glad you liked it! I do believe I've been requested to write another Harmony story in my stories offered thread so be on the lookout for that in a few weeks!

Thanks so much for reviewing, again! :)
~MadiMalfoy x

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Review #6, by tangledconstellations The Yule Ball

8th January 2015:
Hey there!

Thought I'd swing by and leave you a quick review! :) I don't think I've ever read a Harry/Hermione before because...I don't know, I think because it's not canon I've just never gone there. I guess in reality though Harry and Hermione have a really good dynamic, like, the way Harry is pretty much always in awe of her intelligence.

I was really pleasantly surprised by this one-shot! Good job on straight up accepting the challenge given to you in your stories offered thread! I really liked that you maintained all of the teenage awkwardness Harry has at this point in the books. The Yule Ball would have been such a strange experience for all of them! In the books I love that Hermione looks so beautiful - it genuinely makes me so happy, so I'm glad you focused on that here. It was really good that this was just a snapshot into one moment. Like, it doesn't have any repercussions on the later plot - we could just say this was Harry's awkward hormones getting the better of him at this point :) it still felt very true though and you wrote their relationship really well.

For my first experience of Harry/Hermione, this was super good! ♥ Laura xxx

Author's Response: Hey Laura! :)

Honestly, before I wrote this I'd read maybe a total of five Harry/Hermione fics on here and that was well over a year and a half ago, so I'm kind of with you on that aspect!

I figured if people think I possess the talent and skill to write their plunnies, then write them I shall and do my best and hope they like it! Before I began writing this, I reread the yule ball chapter in Goblet of Fire to get a feel for how they acted/spoke during that year so I wouldn't write them horribly OOC. I also made Hermione's dress periwinkle blue, like in the books and not the movie! :P Lady Asphodel specified that she just wanted them to somehow dance together at the yule ball and perhaps have some reflection about each other, so I knew where I wanted it to end, I just had to figure out how to get them dancing in the first place. It would be rather ridiculous for them to go off to a broom closet and have a snogfest, etc because they aren't exactly acknowledging their feelings in this little snapshot either--I feel it's more of an elevated emotions environment, what with it being the yule ball and all, so they don't really know what to make of it and are almost reading too much into things. I'm glad you liked it as your first experience and am very honored you chose mine! :) ♥
~MadiMalfoy x

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Review #7, by Lady Asphodel The Yule Ball

8th January 2015:
Hi! First, I'd really like to say, thanks so much for taking the time to write this! :D

It's cool that this is your first Harry/Hermione fic too! I'm glad to have provided a chance for you! ^_^

Anyways, on to the story!

Your characterization I must say is spot on! Ron is definitely his nonchalant self. Harry's feelings arise when he sees Hermione with Krum. It's natural that she would go to Harry for comfort as he is always there for her! :)

I take it that Ron had argued with her like in the books, but instead Harry is not present when it happened.

I really like the dance scene! I enjoyed the part of Harry's thoughts on Hermione! It gives me shipper feels! ♥

And of course a kiss on the cheek was a perfect touch to an ending! ^_^

I never really expect a big romance between Harry and Hermione. I just always enjoy their companionship - which you got down marvelously! :)

I'm sorry, I'd have reviews minutes ago, but I had some technical problem with signing in to review.

Nevertheless, I enjoyed this quite a lot! Thanks again for writing this!

- Asphodel

Author's Response: Hi! I really enjoyed writing this prompt because Harry/Hermione was something I'd always wanted to try but I just didn't know how to go about it, so I really must thank YOU for giving me a great prompt! :)

Not gonna lie, I actually reread the yule ball chapter in Goblet of Fire to make sure I had plot points correct and characterization correct as well! I could never write Ron as a total villian--only just bad enough to antagonize Hermione occasionally so I tried to keep him like he is portrayed in the book/movie throughout the whole ball. I decided to keep the argument out because that would just be reiterating something we've all seen countless times, plus wouldn't make sense to have in anyway considering the story follows Harry.

Knowing how to properly dance is sort of a dream of mine; I know I could probably learn but my bf definitely does not want to, so it just remains a dream, and I write it into my stories as often as I can! Obviously it is in here as a plot point so it's necessary but I'm glad you enjoyed it! I feel like if I had made them do anything more than a simple kiss on the cheek it would have been slightly too unrealistic because they both are fourteen and not quite able to understand romantic feelings yet and how to handle them, so I'm very happy that you're happy with the kiss on the cheek! :)

Thank you so much for the review and for the prompt, you're welcome to ask for more from me! ♥
~MadiMalfoy x

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