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Review #1, by Dramoine_3 A fresh start

6th January 2015:
Hey. I'm a first timer too. I have hardly 400 reads and one review, so apparently I'm not great, but I figured I could give you some ideas? First, congrats, you're one of he first writers I've seen who uses proper grammar and spelling! :) second, I thiink that maybe he should have someone in his life, (Blaise?) make him realize that pure blood nonsense is stupid. Then he finds Astoria cheating or something? Because i don't think he should dump her for Hermoine for no reason. I might think of more later, and feel free to ditch my ideas, just suggestions! I like the way your story is going! If you don't mind, could you review my one and only story? Thanks if you can! Keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Hey, thnks a lot for the review, we appreciate it :) um yeah we'll totally review your one, it must be good and um we're all practically on the same page and what you told us is what we were sort of planning to do :) but we're not telling you what it is haha :3 um so yeah thanks for the review, it means a lot. :)

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