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Reading Reviews for A Christmas in Azkaban
24 Reviews Found

Review #1, by The Basilisk A Flickering Flame

10th December 2015:
Thisss was not what I was expecting. You captured a dark moment ssso well. It was alssso interesssting to sssee you incorporate the happy moment of the passst into thisss ssstory. You did a very nice job. Not every Christmasss is a happy one as you have presented here.

Thisss is a ssstory I shall carry with me in my thoughtsss as I travel the archives looking for more ssstoriesss to read. Thank you for such a unique take on thingsss. Keep up the lovely work.

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Review #2, by JackRabbit A Flickering Flame

4th October 2015:
I've always loved Sirius' character, and the memories of the Marauders especially hit home. I haven't read many stories about how he regained hope but this was beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love exploring his character, there's so many layers brought about by his experiences. I'm so glad you liked it!

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Review #3, by pottered  A Flickering Flame

14th August 2015:
omg this was so heartbreaking. it feels like my heart is actually in pain. Sirius is my favourite character and to know the fact that he suffered like that in azkaban :c
ok so i love your writing, the descriptions were just so good, i could imagine everything. and every paragraph had such heavy emotions, i honestly felt like crying lol
the cute remus and lily mistletoe and james almost punching him for it was so funny and adorable, and the fact that sirius smiled, even if ruefully, just for a second just broke my heart in pieces. it was just so ??? sad.
and the tears aw no ):
also: the aurors ._. i mean, sure, they thought Sirius was a murderer and /maybe/ what they said would be fine because of the anger and betrayal they went through, but still i felt really mad at the way the taunted Sirius ):
this /is/ dark for Christmas lol, but an amazing read through Sirius' POV when in azkaban during Christmas.
loveddd it!

P.S. going to go find some cat videos to watch to cheer up lol

Author's Response: Yeah, is it mean that I'm glad you're heart is in pain? I mean, that lets me know I'm doing it right. Still, slightly, maybe, sorta sorry for the tears. XD

Don't worry, you were supposed to be mad at them.

Thanks so much for the review, and I hope the cat vids did the trick!

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Review #4, by LunaPike A Flickering Flame

4th August 2015:
Awesome work done! i miss Sirius a lot and reading and thinking about him definitely brought tears to my eyes, i think you have done really good job with highlighting Azkaban. i can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)

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Review #5, by WittyRaven A Flickering Flame

2nd August 2015:
God, I feel sorry for Sirius. I always have, but this makes it so much worse. That is meant as a compliment. Your story really touches me. You can almost feel the emptiness and hopelessness that Sirius feels and it makes me want to cry. Just from your words.
And your afterword was beautiful and very moving.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Review #6, by anapneo A Flickering Flame

6th June 2015:
I love how even though Sirius is in the most horrible place in the wizarding world, he still has the ability to look past it all and envision how he would spend the holiday before going to azkaban.

I don't normally like reading one shots (they never seem like enough), but this was great. It was very well written and I felt that if very accurately portrayed what being in azkaban would be like. The details were perfect, I felt like I was there watching all of this play out. Loved it!

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Review #7, by oldershouldknowbetter A Flickering Flame

4th June 2015:
Let's see what your favourite is like then shall we, that and I'm here for a bit of BvB, and I'm also here to give you a bit of a surprise yourself.

Just a paragraph in and I can see that I'm in for a first rate read. Your word useage is really evocative; not only can we imagine Sirius to be here we can also almost picture ourselves there too.

I always hated the fact that he was innocent, and it must be so cold stuck on a rock in the middle of the North Sea, and I always imagined that the wizarding hierarchy would be skimpy on the niceties of comfort for the prisoners deemed bad enough to be incarcerated there. You capture all of that quite ably in the first few paragraphs.

I like the way you used Footsteps, that means people, not the Dementors. Not this time...' at the beginning - it puts his internal thoughts into the background while you describe the rest, it's a good touch. When the owners of the footsteps finally arrive, they are a pair of bored guards unlucky enough to have drawn the Christmas shift - grumpy about the fact as you would expect.

Oh wow, I just read the paragraph where he'd abandoned keeping track of the days and the unfairness and consequent horror just came crashing down on me through your words. Again really evocative and beautifully done (in it's horrificness).

The taunting from the guards is as we expect it would be and certainly as Sirius expects it. The usual taunts that he must have come accustomed to over the years. I always wondered, why he didn't proclaim his innocence, but you touch upon that here, though obliquely. At the start he wouldn't have, but after a few years of the horror I bet he would have tried to tell his gaolers - it would have been too late by then, actual Death Eaters like Barty Crouch Jnr were doing it from day one. So he spares himself their mocking taunts by not saying anything at all, even when they mention the death of his mother. It's a nice touch when he even gets a bit of empathy for them as he recognises their youthful inexperience and nervousness. The empathy is short lived, drowned beneath his own emotional needs to survive.

There is even some personal vindictiveness thrown in, which is quite understandable, but the pathetic figure that Sirius now cuts arouses less anger in the young guard than even he thinks - he leaves with a parting off-handed, dismissive remark and the other guard does the same.

He cannot escape yet into his dog form, not quite yet - if they come back he'd be sunk - so he has to stay human and cognisant for a while and stew on his thoughts.

He journeys back to a better time, a warmer time in contrast to the chill of his present. As dismal and cold as you made us feel before, you now paint a picture of comfort and warmth. Your use of words and description is once again well done and brings the story to life within us.

Then, all too soon you bring it crashing down upon us and him - the Dememtors arrive and with them comes the visions of the worst memories of his life. We all know the details from the books, but here you have given them the twist of being from Sirius' tortured rememberings and, yet again, you bring them to life in a stark and amazingly real way. I like the way that you have him telling it because it is from his memories after all. I like the way you mixed up the memories slightly, as they have become jumbled together in his mind and are being dragged from him against his will. His disappointment at having his moment of peace and joy dragged from him is palpable.

Once the Dementors go he is left unconscious upon the floor, not knowing that his namesake is shining down upon him as a promise of better to come.

Just as an aside, I started this story because I like Sirius as a character, and while his incarceration in Azkaban was necessary (for JKR's story purposes) I always hated it. Do you know the sort of thing, when you read a story and somehow wished events could have moved differently so that a character you like could be spared his anguish? Then, as I do, after starting my review I look over other people's just to see if there is anything I've missed. Wow the reviewers on this read like a list of the active members of our house, with a few notables thrown in from outside.

This is very good and I can see why it is one of your favourites.


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Review #8, by Aphoride A Flickering Flame

4th June 2015:
Hey there - dropping by for our review swap on the forums! :)

I have this kind of morbid love of Sirius-in-Azkaban stories, because they have such potential for angst, anger, and horror/dark, which are all things I love. Especially with Sirius, who's such a fascinating character himself, so really, I was very happy you suggested this one ;)

I love the way you did this and focused more, I think, on the kind of humane aspects of being in Azkaban - the memories you lose and the way it tortures you, really, by taking them away and leaving you with nothing but the ones you hate. It's so damaging, you know - could completely change the way you remembered people. But yeah, the horror/dark element of this with the Dementors was done so so well! :)

The way you wrote Sirius was so great, too. I loved the mentions of the pain he feels at being 'reminded' of 'killing' his friends, and the guilt he feels over it, tempered with the sweet, happy memory of him with them at Christmas, being so very familial, really :) There was something so heartfelt about the emotions you described, and something so Marauder-like about the Christmas, too - with the boys hatching plans, and James nearly hitting Remus for having to kiss Lily under the mistletoe :P

Your writing in this was lovely, too - sometimes your description was a little too 'tell' rather than 'show', but all of your word choice was brilliant, and it allowed the emotions and the contrasting horror and warmth of the scenes to come through, which gave it so much more impact when the Dementors arrived.

This was a great little oneshot - and the message at the end was so beautiful, so sad but so true! :)

Aph xx

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Review #9, by Gabriella Hunter A Flickering Flame

21st May 2015:

This is Gabbie from the forums with your review and it's nice to meet you and all that junk. Let's get this review up and rolling! >:D

I have read quite a few stories about Sirius but not too many that deal with what happened to him once he was imprisoned. I'm really pleased and blown away by how beautiful this piece was, I think that you handled the despair, anger, regret and eventual joy of his memories very well. It's brilliant writing and I liked the history that you developed between Sirius and his friends, the depth of love that he can still feel in such an awful place.

The Aurors that visited him were cruel and I know that it hurt his pride to know that people thought of him as a murderer. I also liked that while he knows he's innocent, he falters somewhat and begins to doubt himself but remembers the family that he cherished. I thought that was a really powerful way to bring depth to his character and I loved the back and forth with his grief and love.

As you can probably guess, I thought this was wonderfully written and it was a unique and engrossing read. :)

Much love,


Author's Response: Thanks so much Gabbie, and I'm extremely happy that you enjoyed this! Sirius is one of my favorite characters, and this was absolutely heartbreaking to write, but at the same time I felt like someone should, so I did. Sirius, despite how much I love his character, does have his faults, but his loyalty isn't one of them.

He's so tragic, after finally finding people who accept and welcome him, ones he feels like family with, he loses all of it and as soon as he gets it back he dies. It's all so sad, but even then there's always that little bit of hope.

I just find it all so fascinating to explore, and I'm glad to see you enjoyed it. :)

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Review #10, by cherry_pop94 A Flickering Flame

19th May 2015:
Hello there! Here for the BvB challenge!

First of all, that was a lovely author's note. The message is definitely an important one and even though it isn't currently the holiday season, I think it's something we'd all do well to remember. Not everyone gets to go home to a warm bed and loving family. Some people stay in the shadows, forgotten by the rest of the world.

Now, about your story. It really was a wonderful read. You're an excellent writer! I especially love the story that the one auror told about how he used to look up Sirius. I felt so sorry for him when he said that his brother had died fighting Death Eaters inspired to join because of Sirius Black. That really was truly heartbreaking and an interesting way to write a character who could so easily be vilified. The way you wrote the other aurors made them into real people as well. And why wouldn't they hate Sirius? They don't know he's innocent, they think he's a mass murder who betrayed his best friend.

And the part where Sirius's imagined Christmas becomes the destroyed Potter house! You just ripped my heart out of my chest with that one. Sirius really is such a tragic character. Abandoned by his family because of his choice in friends, then fighting a war for what short years he did have as a free adult, finding his best friend dead, and then carted off to Azkaban for 12 years. And to top it all off, he only gets a few years free before being killed! Ack, he didn't deserve that kind of life.

Anyway, I'm off topic. This was wonderful and amazing. I just noticed one thing. You wrote "He toned out the conversation" but I believe it should be "he tuned out the conversation."

Still, this story was incredible!

Thanks for sharing :)


Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much! I felt like I should have done something to justify the Aurors. It makes them seem more human, more real. It felt right, I guess. It makes sense.

I ripped out my own heart writing it, so don't worry. I made some of my best friends cry when I forced them to read this. (one told me I wouldn't be able to write a depressing Christmas fic. I already had this on hand, so I told everyone to look it up and watch. I felt so good and so bad at the same time. My boyfriend was going around passing out tissues, he went and got them the moment I asked them to read...ah, he knows me so well.

Thanks again for the review, and I fixed the typeo!

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Review #11, by MargaretLane A Flickering Flame

19th May 2015:
I really LOVE the description of Azkaban and the black hound huddled there in the first paragraph. You REALLY capture the atmosphere.

You are really good at sort of sensual writing - in the sense of describing senses, like the feel of the blanket. That is hard to do.

I actually have an angsty Christmas story too. And I wrote a fic about Sirius in prison - a songfic, because his ordeal reminds me of some real world events. Events I can still get angry hearing about.

I think the part where he can't remember how many years he's been in Azkaban is really realistic. It would be VERY hard to keep track of the days for 12 years when every day is the exact same and there is no break in routine whatsoever.

OH, I never thought of Sirius having been an Auror. I assumed he'd only fought for the Order of the Phoenix. It does seem like a career that'd appeal to him though.

I love the depth you give the situation here. I assumed they were just sneering at him because they hated Death Eaters in general, but the combination of one of them having a brother who died in the war and the disillusionment he appears to have felt, having looked up to Sirius as a kid adds extra detail. And it makes so much SENSE. The Marauders, James and Sirius, in particular are exactly the kind of teens that would appeal to young teens and preteens - a few years older, good-looking, intelligent, disrespectful to the teachers, brave, cool. I can really imagine the younger students looking up to them en mass.

Aw, it's so sad that he still feels he might has well have killed them himself.

Your description of Christmas and Lily giving out to James made me smile straight away. You are so good at scene setting.

LOVE the part about them watching films. It makes sense that Lily'd want a TV and while electronics don't work at Hogwarts, there's no reason they wouldn't in an ordinary wizarding home, where there'd be much less magic around.

And yikes, the change in his mood as the Dementors approach is STARK. You can really FEEL it while reading.

And you REALLY show the way the Dementors bring back all his worst memories. I've rarely if even seen that done that well.

Love the line about how he was drowning and nobody could see.

And I love the mention of the dog star at the end.

I'm not a big Sirius fan, but like I said, his ordeal does remind me of the men who DID spend about 15 year in jail for terrorist crimes they hadn't committed - even the dates almost match. So I certainly have sympathy for him. And now, I'm completely rambling.

This was an awesome story.

Author's Response: It actually says in the books that Sirius was partnered with James after Prongs dropped out of professional Quiddich because of the war to join the Aurors. That was what the tale was about where they got chased on Sirius' motorbike by some policemen and they few off. I think they had something to drink that night and then saw some death eaters and tried chasing them. I think. But it was during that time.

I try to give some logic to my stories. I get kinda irritated when people gloss over things they could have easily come up with an explanation for. It takes away depth and makes it less realistic. I feel like it doesn't give the stories the justice they deserve, and try my best to avoid falling into those traps. I also find it best just to go with it and improvise, because plotting can also do that. It makes it seem TOO thought out, like it doesn't just go naturally. At least, with some. I really admire people who can actually pull that off, but I do better coming up as I go and fleshing out in my head.

It's fine, I ramble all the time. Thanks for the review, your story was awesome too! (I think I just did a slant rhyme...)

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Review #12, by TearsIMustConceal A Flickering Flame

9th May 2015:
Hey! Im here with your review!

I was completely drawn by the darkness of this fic (dark, angsty fics are my favourite) and I wasnt disappointed after reading!

Youre imagery and description is completely spot on I could picture every scene so clearly and vividly. And I could feel the desperation radiating off Sirius. Him being hidden in the corner of the cell as though that would hide him from the cruelty and darkness of Azkaban I really felt all his emotions in that one part.

The scene with the guards I really felt sorry him there because as much as the guards dont know it, he just doesnt deserve it. But I feel him not reacting is a sign that hes grown up, which isnt surprising seeing as where he is being imprisoned I would imagine you have to grow up quickly in there to survive. But then a part of me thinks that him not reacting to their taunts is that he has given up, maybe not on his life but on the fact that no one will ever believe that he innocent. Either way, I feel so sorry for him.

And I love the end that he still feels a spark of hope that one day he will get of that horrid replace and start afresh. Its such an uplifting end to an otherwise dark story.

I absolutely loved all of it and Im so glad I read it!


Author's Response: Thank you for the swap, and I'm very glad you like it. I like Angsty stories myself, so I end up writing quite a few. Glad you liked it. :)

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Review #13, by Claire Evergreen A Flickering Flame

7th May 2015:
Hey! Here for our review swap!

So Sirius is one of my absolute favorite characters and even though he is pretty much out of his mind at this point, his characterization is absolutely brilliant. I'v never thought too much about what it was like for him in Azkaban (because it is just too sad and depressing for me to think about), but you've nailed it.

I can't even begin to explain how this whole thing made me feel, I'm still trying to process everything. I'll probably have to read it a few more times before I'm sure, but wow, this is amazing, I'm so glad that I got to read it!


Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, I tried really hard with this one. Thanks so much for the swap!

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Review #14, by merlins beard A Flickering Flame

6th May 2015:
Hi there!

This has been on my reading list for quite a while and I finally managed to get to it.

Poor, poor sirius. He had to endure that terrible place for far too long. Azkaban for me is a symbolic place for all the pain and terrible things. I believe, no matter how evil someone is, no one deserves to be sentenced to life in Azkaban. The dementors seem to be nothing short of torture, and it's permanent there. It wouldn't even be legal to lock someone up there.

I've always felt sorry for Sirius, and I love how you said in your AN that he stands for fighting all the darkness. He is an incredibly strong character. Who could learn to lovelove/trust after the childhood Sirius has? Who could keep up the fun loving, pranking nature?
And that's all before he spent 12 years in the most terrible place I can imagine.

I really loved the story, but this time, I liked your Authors Note even more. We should all set an example, and not even just at Christmas. There are people who need help, and we should try our best to make a difference in their lives.


Author's Response: Thank you so much, this is actually one of my personal favorites. I'm extremely happy to have achieved what I was hoping for, to make people think. It's my opinion that every story you read should impact the reader in some way, and I'm glad to hear that it did. :)

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Review #15, by TreacleTart A Flickering Flame

3rd May 2015:
Hello there!

I'm here for our review swap!

I chose to read this story because I've seen you posting a lot about it on the forums and because I'm a total sucker for dark writing. Not to mention Sirius is one of my favorite characters.

I should tell you up front that I am pretty obsessive about description and imagery. It's something that I feel most people do half heartedly to fill in space between dialogue. You on the other hand have written almost an entire story out of it and done so quite well! Your words were able to create a very vivid picture of Azkaban for me. I could imagine Sirius in the fetid squalor of it all and how time had warn away at the charm he once held. It was beautifully done.

The short interaction between the guards really showed us how much Sirius has grown and matured. As a young man, he would've risen to the bait, but now he realizes that there's no point in rising to it.

Now onto a bit of constructive criticism. I noticed that you tend to try and pack an awful lot into each sentence. Most of the time it works, but on occasion it can have the tendency to run on a bit. I think breaking a few of the more massive sentences up into shorter ones might help a bit.

Also, I noticed a few typos.
A explosion. An explosion

deeper then just the surface... deeper than

a angry one, - an angry

Otherwise, this was a great look into Sirius' time spent in Azkaban. You do seem to have quite a knack for description! Great work!


Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, I noticed some of these problems myself, and am attempting on tackling them into submission. It just keeps popping up.

I loved your story as well, thanks for the swap!

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Review #16, by bittersweetflames A Flickering Flame

21st April 2015:
Here for our swap! :)
First off, OMG, your story is just.. CHILLS. Just the chills!
Your writing is so atmospheric and I could just picture being there, I could practically feel as Sirius felt. It broke my heart.
Anyway, well done with this story. I won't say I enjoyed it because it wasn't meant to be enjoyed but I loved it -- it was just beautifully written. Thanks for the swap. :))


Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and I'm really happy that it affected you like that, it means I'm doing my job right. XD

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Review #17, by Cannons A Flickering Flame

20th April 2015:
Hi, here for our swap. :)

I enjoyed the concept of 'hope' and how important and powerful it is. Sirius couldn't have been in a worse possible situation and yet he still found a shred of hope to cling on to.

I thought you did a good job at portraying the setting and Azkaban itself, I really got the sense that it was cold, dark and unwelcoming.

Thanks for the read!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm really happy you liked it!

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Review #18, by Flower n Prongs A Flickering Flame

20th April 2015:
Hi Shadowkat! It's Rhaenyra here for our review exchange.

I am a fan of missing moments from canon and of Sirius Black, so the first story on your list caught my attention. I think that not enough attention is given to his time in Azkaban because it clearly had such a big impact on him, so I'm glad you decided to tackle some of his imprisonment.

Your portrayal of Azkaban was so vivid and descriptive, Sirius's despair was almost tangible. The fact that he had lost track of time and even himself, at times,
was very powerful and sad. Part of the reason was because it felt so realistic, like a man who had lost all hope of things ever even having the chance of getting better.

The cocky Aurors made me angry, because I know Sirius is innocent. I don't blame them for thinking he was guilty, not really, since they wouldn't have been the ones who shoved him in prison but you made them easy to hate.

Even though it is nearly four months since Christmas, I truly enjoyed this. It was beautifully written and your author's note at the end brought up excellent points about people like Sirius in our world.

Thanks for the review swap! I enjoyed reading this. =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I worked extremelyhard on this, and I'm glad it came through. That's one reason I wrote this, because not many others have. I felt like it was something that deserved being written about, you know? I really loved your story as well, thanks for the swap!

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Review #19, by HeyMrsPotter A Flickering Flame

20th April 2015:
Hey! Here for our swap!

This is so different to any other christmas fic I've read. I like that you strayed from the norm and wrote a darker story. I think you descirbed Azkaban and Sirius' feelings while he was there perfectly. His pain and suffering and the injustice of him being there were so clear throughout. I think the memory broke up the story really nicely and I like that you ended on an almost hopeful note,it was really fitting with Sirius' personality.

Great job! Thanks for the swap :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I always love exploring his character, and Azkaban was definitely a key part of his life. I'm glad I got the emotions across right. Thanks for the swap, your story was great too! :)

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Review #20, by HermyLuna2 A Flickering Flame

14th April 2015:
This was very touching. It was good how you showed the Aurors belittling Sirius with his 'crimes', to underline his tragedy. "He might as well have been the real murderer..." was a great sentence. I admire you for chosing such a difficult viewpoint to write about. I had the idea that after reading this story I understood a part of Sirius a bit more. The way he holds on to his sanity by remembering the Christmas moments with his friends was realistic for his character. You did an excellent job with this.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Review #21, by toomanycurls A Flickering Flame

10th April 2015:

I really enjoyed your take on Sirius in Azkaban. I'm not sure if you've read The Count of Monte Cristo but the annual auror visit reminded me of the annual beating Edmond recieved at the Chateau d'if to mark the passing of each year. I imagine a verbal assault like the aurors gave him were a bit worse than a physical assault only because the words and feelings stay with people longer in Azkaban. I did think their taunts about his mother dying were unnecessarily mean (though, at least he learned that she died). It does explain how he knew stuff when he got out of prison.

The Christmas memory was so bittersweet. I imagine any sort of happiness, even momentary, would cause the dementors to swarm on someone. It's sweet that, despite having the dementors take it away afterwards, Sirius enjoyed and sought out happy memories from time to time.

Great one shot!


Author's Response: Well, meanness was what they were going for, after all. And yeah, I'd love to have everyone think I'm a master planner weaving those details together...but I honestly didn't think about that until after it had been written. I knew they'd both died while he was in Azkaban, but we didn't know when. His mother is implied to have died soon after his imprisonment considering how dirty it was when we're first introduced to the House of Black, but she could have just as easily been senile and Kretcher just not doing anything. Honestly, I could very easily picture that.

Yeah, bittersweet happens to be one of my specialties.

Thanks for the review!

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Review #22, by Jayna A Flickering Flame

7th April 2015:
Lovely! This is a beautiful one shot and the ending is perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's one of my personal favorites, and I feel really proud of this. :)

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Review #23, by marauderfan A Flickering Flame

27th December 2014:
Hi! I'm here with your review :)

This was really good! I am so glad you brought this story to my attention as I might not have found it otherwise.

Your descriptions are fantastic, particularly when illustrating the cold of the cell in Azkaban, and the nightmares, and Sirius changing from a dog into a person. And then the happy memory, full of love and happy emotions, instantly contrasted with when the Dementors come back and force him back into the bad memories - the bad memory of him being dragged off after Peter's betrayal is equally detailed, but it didn't feel very emotional - it was mainly just numb. Which I thought was perfect for the circumstances. He's been sitting in prison for twelve years and is numb to it all by now, and he's probably relived this unpleasant scene countless times. So I really liked the way you wrote with such detail but lack of deep emotion - it suited the story so well. But it still takes the reader on an emotional rollercoaster. Basically, your description and the way you set the tone in this story is brilliant. I applaud you.

The guards coming by to taunt him made me really sad. It just reinforces how utterly heartbreaking Sirius's story is and all he had to endure for something he didn't do. Gah, he really had to deal with the worst, and how all he has is these good memories that he holds onto until they get taken away and the Dementors come by, but even so it's still worth it for him to dwell on the past. The fact that he still had some hope only makes him stronger for everything he had to go through. I liked your A/N at the end by the way, those are important things you said and definitely puts in perspective how easy it is to take things for granted during the Christmas season.

I know you asked for honest feedback and CC to improve it, but there's practically nothing I would change about this story. Other than this typo:
Sirius leaned his head back against the cold stonewall -- 'stone wall' should be two words.

It's sad, it's heartbreaking, but then there's a little bit of hope at the end, which I absolutely love. This was such a good story! Thanks for requesting!

Author's Response: Sorry I didn't respond sooner, I always forget to check...we really need to be able to get notifications. Thank you so much, though honestly I still think I could improve. I'm good at discribing, yes, but there are always things that feel as if they're missing to me. Although, maybe that's just me beating up on myself. I do tend to do that a lot, or so I'm told. I really am glad what I was mainly aiming for got through, thank you. Sometimes I think I get discouraged from lack of reviews, so that you took the time to look at my request really made my day. :3

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Review #24, by grednforge217 A Flickering Flame

22nd December 2014:
This is a wonderful fic. I don't try to think about the time Sirius spent in Azkaban because it's so terribly sad, but you made it touching and hopeful. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad that you liked it. Have a marry Christmas! :3

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