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Review #1, by ScoroseOTP Chapter One

27th December 2014:
Hey PhoenixQuill!

First off, thank you so much for entering and submitting my challenge!

So, firstly, this is a little different for me, I've never read a James/Scorpius fic. I'm more of a ScoRose kind of girl!

I really thought this was cute!
You need a really good job of this!

Al being uncomfortable was hilarious to me, I literally love that, he's one of my favourites and I do this he would act like that!

This is such a different way to present James but I really enjoyed it. He's normally such a lady's girl! The way his sensitive side is there is exactly him. He just needs to show it more. The same with Scorpius! Love it!

You did such a good job! Well done! Thanks so much again for submitting! Check out the Hall of Fame soon for the results! I may even create a blog! Watch out on my authors page on the forums for links!

Emz xxx

Emz xxx

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review and for the opportunity to enter the challenge!
Yeah, I used to be ScoRose, and I still am a bit, but I wanted to try out new ships. It's sort of a crackship, but it was fun to write. I'm glad to hear it was cute!
Yeah, Al would be the one to see his brother in a couple and just go 'oh my god James please no'. Same for Lily, also regardless of whatever gender each of them hooked up with.
James is usually seen as the charmer, the lady's man, but once again, I'm branching out and trying to match new aspects to people, and I liked this aspect with James for some reason.
I'll be sure to keep an eye on the Hall of Fame, and thank you so much!
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

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Review #2, by Tris  Chapter One

17th December 2014:
THAT WAS SO CUTE! Seriously I was trying hard to hide my squeals. I have read scorp/Albus but this was even better! WRITE MORE PLEASE, I want to read more! :)

Author's Response: Hey, thank you! I'm glad to hear this was a cute story, I wanted it to be cute and fluffy, it is a holiday fic, after all. I am tempted to write some more James/Scorp, it was a fun experience.
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

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Review #3, by wolfgirl17 Chapter One

4th December 2014:
Hey love,

This was lovely. I'm usually not big on slash or cliches, but this was cute.

Cannonically Scorp would actually be two years below James, but let's not quibble over details when there is mistletoe and conniving tarts and sickly sweet romance to devour!

This was super cute! Thanks so much for entering my comp! I hope you enjoyed writing for it, cos the aim was for everyone to have fun and get in the spirit!

I will probably be posting the results of the challenge between xmas and new year's.

Much love, good luck and happy holidays!


Author's Response: Hello, and thanks for the review!
I did want to use the cliche of mistletoe in this, since I've never really written a mistletoe fic. I did try and remove the cliche (or at least lampshade it) by making James and Albus notice how cliche it actually was.
I thought that Scorpius was a year younger, since he and Albus were in the same year level, and James was in second year when Albus was starting at Hogwarts. I may need to double that, though!
I'm glad it was cute! I had fun writing, and expanding my horizons with a male perspective (plus, writing cute kissing scenes is my guilty pleasure). I can't wait for the results!
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

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