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Reading Reviews for If things were different.
  
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by cruisechick Remorse

1st January 2015:
Great story so far :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

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Review #2, by poobear Remorse

20th October 2014:
Hay Alum
Thankyou for your replay it wss good of you thankyou muchley.
Iam sure you will get greff for doing things different but as thay say a change is good as a rest he he but saying that its a good and intresting change tho so sod umm he he, Also no worreys on how long the chapters are its the quality that counts and you have bags of.
Top chapter again and i think you have the old fool (dumms-de-door)as i never thort he was a full shilling if you now what i mean ??.
So anywho still very much like were your taking this so keep up the good work and very much look forward to the next chapter to come as i love what your doing so far.
You take care now and i hope you have a good week by for now my very best.
Bruce x

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I havent been able to get on recently but am working on the story now.

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Review #3, by Dragonsfire21 Remorse

19th October 2014:
This is a good story I like the whole Dursley's caring for Harry angle can't wait for the next chapter hope you post it soon

Author's Response: Sorry havent updated. Ipad broke and just recently got a new laptop. So I am currently working on next chapter.

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Review #4, by poobear Doorstep

14th October 2014:
Hi There
Well this is intresting to say the least but in a good way i would be very intrested to see were you take this and i will say very good start and i dont think anyone has gone down this line before so good look with and i defo look forward to reading more.
You take care and have a good week by for now.
Bruce

Author's Response: Hey Bruce,
Thanks for the feedback, I always wondered about those what if moments. So I figured I would try my own spin on them. I know some spots people may hate me for what I write but there always needs to be some drama to keep people reading. Next chapter will be up in a few days. I know the chapters aren't long but that is because I am using an iPad. But from now on they should be 1,000+ words each chapter.
Alum.


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