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Reading Reviews for The Marauders Kiss
  
541 Reviews Found

Review #1, by gigi James' spontaneity.

23rd February 2017:
This was such a good story. Hope you haven't abandoned it and will complete it soon.

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Review #2, by emma28 James' spontaneity.

5th February 2017:
Haaha "I'm practically the saviour of the wizarding world". In a way her kinda is. I mean if it wasn't for james (and lily) Harry wouldnt exist.

This is an amazing, fantastic, addicting, well-written story! You wrote every single character extremely well. You understand James, Sirius, Remus, Peter and Lily. Other stories I have read wrote the character kinda one dimensional. They pretty much give them one personality trait.
But you managed to get every character spot on and wrote them the way they should have be written, and you made them grow along the way and mature. And I love how you included Peter distancing himself from the group, hinting that he is possibly joining Voldemort.

I can tell that you've done quite a bit of research for this story as everything you wrote is canon. Not only the characters but also most of the plots. Like the Whomping Willow incident. That is my favourite scene. Because while it is sad, you wrote it perfectly. I've read other stories about that scene and I've never really agreed with them. Because James is very loyal to his friends, so of course he would be mad with Sirius and wouldn't make up with him anytime soon. And I love that you got Dumbledore involved in it. You wrote the scene very seriously as it should have been written.
I can tell you put a lot of thought into every chapter. Like you put yourself in each characters shoes and thought how they would think. Because this is the most canon marauder era fic I have read so far (and probably will ever read).

A lot of people think Sirius would have dated many girls and slept around a bit. But I never really thought he would be like that. James may have before he even started to like Lily, but Sirius is too damaged for that in my opinion. So it was nice to finally read a story where Sirius isn't the 'player' of the school just because he's handsome.

I like how you wrote Remus also. It was painful to read some of his chapters because it was so sad. I always knew that Remus has/had a lot of trouble with his Lycanthropy but I never really gave it much more thought than that. But after reading this, I fully realise how insecure he is and how tormented and conflicted he is. This is the only story that really made me sympathise and understand Remus.

And I enjoyed reading about James because not only is he entertaining, but I could see him maturing and growing over time. A lot of other stories write James as immature, cheeky and childish and then suddenly he does a 180 and his mature and grown up. It kinda gives you whiplash. But you slowly developed his character so we could see his progress. I really enjoyed reading James.

I never really gave Regulus much thought before this story, to be honest. But I went back to the books to read what little info we know of him, and I noticed that you stuck to the books and expanded it to make it your own. While in the books it appears that Sirius doesn't care for his brother and doesn't love him anymore, he is still his brother. Chapter 64: Torn, was so well written. And it made me sympathise with Regulus. This is most likely what Regulus' and Sirius' upbringing was actually like. I can understand now why Regulus became a death eater. He was put in a difficult situation, especially after Sirius left. You made me see Regulus in a whole new light. I understand fully now why Sirius was so bitter about Regulus joining the death eaters in OOTP.
It was also nice to see how Regulus and Ali's relationship developed. It's nice that she's genuinely concerned for him and trying to help him. It's just sad because we all know how that will end.


And lastly, I very much enjoyed reading about Ali and her family. And I loved seeing Ali grow and develop over time. It was nice to see Sirius help her grow and vice versa. I also like how you wrote about the similarities between Christian and Sirius. It was fun to see Christian go from not liking Sirius to becoming best buds with him.
Ali and Sirius are a very good match. I love seeing their relationship grow. They both had their insecurities (Ali about physical contact/PDA, and Sirius about his family/self-worth), and I love that you addressed them. Especially Sirius, as that's something he definitely had as it was even evident in the books. So it was nice to see that included and in the end it helped them grow.

I hope this story isn't abandoned! I would love to read more and see how it ends. I really enjoyed this story and you are a very talented writer. Please update as soon a you can. Thank you so much for writing this story and I look forward to reading more! :)
10/10

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Review #3, by emma28 Many different admissions.

5th February 2017:
this was a sad but much needed fight. sirius has insecurity issues. and so many people seem to forget this and dont address it in their stories. i really like that you took the time to write about it which in the end, helps their relationship grow and they become stronger. this was really well done
10/10

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Review #4, by emma28 Actions not advised.

5th February 2017:
poor remus. i hated how marlene flinched from him when he tried to touch her. i mean, she knew him well before she found out he was a werewolf. he's still the same person. Its really frustrating.
10/10

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Review #5, by emma28 James and Sirius take London.

4th February 2017:
Haha i loved this chapter. I like how you added to the short story and made it your own
10/10

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Review #6, by emma28 Torn.

4th February 2017:
This was so wwll written. There's only so much that we know of regulus, but you've pieced it all together perfectly. It's so sad this chapter. And it really makes you realise how bad sirius' home life was. I always thought hanging the house elf heads on the wall was creepy. But actually reading it happen makes it so much worse. This chapter was so real and so sad and it's all canon info that you used which makes it so much better and sadder
10/10

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Review #7, by emma28 Ali's secret mission.

31st January 2017:
Great chapter. So funny when peter apparated in a pond lol
10/10

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Review #8, by emma28 Two jealous redheads.

29th January 2017:
Haha what a sweet chapter. You got lilys parents perfectly and petunias jealousy. That's exactly how James would be meeting her parents. Lol 10/10

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Review #9, by emma28 Anger and bargaining.

25th January 2017:
Sweet chapter. Still sad because i feel her pain . But very good chapter
10/10

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Review #10, by emma28 The Minister of pranks.

24th January 2017:
Haha mcgonagall laughing!
10/10

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Review #11, by emma28 Denial and isolation.

24th January 2017:
This was so difficult to read because it's so sad. Very well written though.
10/10

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Review #12, by emma28 Message received.

24th January 2017:
Poor aaliyah. Well written. I actually felt her pain. You're a really good writer
10/10

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Review #13, by emma28 Digging deeper.

23rd January 2017:
Wow this chapter was so well written. It's heart breaking reading about his childhood. Really good chapter 10/10

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Review #14, by emma28 The strongest of the Marauders.

23rd January 2017:
This was so sad. Poor james

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Review #15, by emma28 Sirius meets the Adams.

22nd January 2017:
This was cute. Aaliyah and her mum reminds me of me and my mum. We're constantly butting heads because we're so alike lol
10/10

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Review #16, by emma28 Sirius's confession.

22nd January 2017:
I've always wanted details about Lily and James defying voldemort
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Review #17, by emma28 Back to back Black.

22nd January 2017:
That was so cute when she tried to flirt. But I still don't think this will end well. Jealousy plans almost never do
10/10

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Review #18, by emma28 Definitions and tactics.

22nd January 2017:
What is going on with Sirius. I thought he was all googly eyed for her.
I got a feeling this plan won't end well.
Great chapter
10/10

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Review #19, by emma28 The queen of solitude.

21st January 2017:
They're very cute together. Good chapter
10/10

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Review #20, by emma28 Sirius's Kiss.

21st January 2017:
Arghh this is infuriating but so good!
10/10

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Review #21, by emma28 Social experiments.

21st January 2017:
Yay finally, its about time!
10/10

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Review #22, by emma28 Siblings by default.

21st January 2017:
This was a nice chapter. Its good to see Sirius and lily have a heart to heart
10/10

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Review #23, by emma28 Full moon moods.

21st January 2017:
Poor remus
10/10
Good chapter

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Review #24, by emma28 Transfiguration practice.

21st January 2017:
You've really got Sirius down perfectly
I wonder what regulus is up to
10/10

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Review #25, by emma28 James's Kiss.

21st January 2017:
I hope sirius mood picks up. He doesn't handle jealousy well does he.
10/10

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