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Reading Reviews for Vacation Wars
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Gemma Mum and Hogsmeade

28th October 2014:
I was so happy to see that the next chapter was validated--and even more pleased when I finally read it! This is quickly becoming on of my favorites. I really loved how you handled Lily's family dynamics with her mother and Petunia. It feels like a real, organic family relationship. I also really loved the flashback--it was the perfect spot for it and reads like an action movie. More, please! : ) I'm looking forward to your next update. Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it! I'll work toward posting it sooner rather than later...

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Review #2, by Gemma Potter and The Plans

26th September 2014:
Please keep on updating, I'm now officially addicted to this story after only two chapters! To be fair, I was sort of in love with it after the first chapter, but I was in too much of a hurry to continue reading, I skipped the review (sorry) and went straight to the second installment. Your writing is so smart and realistic--it's a refreshing change of pace from a lot of other stuff I've seen and I love the way you've handled bringing the war into the story. Please keep up the excellent work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and I'm sorry I didn't answer you sooner. I haven't been very focused on my writing, so I haven't logged on in a while. Don't worry, though, I'm not abandoning this. A new chapter should be up soon! It just has to be validated. :)

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