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Review #1, by snufflesthedog And If It's Meant to Be, It'll Come Back to You

19th August 2014:

I'm here for the Blue/Bronze Review Battle.

First of all, I have to say that I thought your story was lovely. I liked the way you portrayed Lily and James in a different light, and had them falling in love and then fighting in a very humane and realistic way. You really bring the reader into the minds of your characters, and this makes the story compelling and great to read.

You said in your A/N that you wrote the story at midnight, which is why there are some typos, so maybe in the future, unless you have a deadline, leave it until the next day and look over it? There were (very) few mistakes, and although they did not take away from the great story, or lessen the quality, it would probably good to quickly read through your work to fix it a bit.

Loved it!

xx snufflesthedog

Author's Response: Hey there snuffles (if you don't mind me calling you that).

I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it! I wasn't all that happy with the result but it's good to hear that it wasn't totally bad!

I know I shouldn't write at midnight because of the mistakes that I would no doubt make but inspiration just struck at midnight and I had to write everything down and only then could I go to sleep.

Thank you for the review!

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