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Reading Reviews for Operation Red
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Oregonian A Room of Red

18th March 2015:
Hi, Chazzie. This is Vicki of Slytherin House.

This was a cute little story, total fluff but fun to read. I was intrigued by all the details that added up to some sort of plot being hatched, obviously with all the details having been considered and taken care of, a masterwork of organization, and yet we readers didn't know until well into the story exactly what was afoot. It was good to see James masterminding something other than a mindless prank with some poor victim being the butt of an inconsiderate joke.

The Room of Requirement is a setting often seen because it is easy to use, but your description of all the decorations conjure a unique image in our minds, and the bubble machine that dresses the participants in snazzy clothes and incidentally forces them to publicly confess their secret loves was a clever touch.

James' speech gave the story its reason for being, an uplifting philosophy that appealed to everyone's better nature and seemed to extend the olive branch even to Snape. Nice job. Thank you for writing. (A mention also of the HPFF review challenge.)

Author's Response: Hey Vicki!

Thank you for your review! I'm pretty sure I was half asleep when writing this, hence all the random fluffiness haha.

I figured that by 7th year James might have grown up a little bit. I doubt Lily would have gone out with him had he not. I felt that this is one of the last times that they all get to be kids, before heading off to the uncertainty that awaits them in Voldemort's rise to power.

I'm glad you liked the room of requirement, and I hope it wasn't too cliched!

Lottie


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Review #2, by Anon A Room of Red

12th August 2014:
LOVE IT! And I love your writing...

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you very much :) it's lovely to hear what you thought!

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Review #3, by Lisa A Room of Red

12th August 2014:
Hi - I liked your story a lot! I love Sirius and Remus together and how you 'outed' them was so cute and creative.

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :)
Lottie


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