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Review #1, by miss author Seven Years of Lily Evans

4th November 2014:
This is a really good story. I like the idea and the content.

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Review #2, by XxXCrookshanksXxXP3 Seven Years of Lily Evans

10th August 2014:
This is so cute. I love it. I also really loved that last scene in year six with Sirius trying to get Mary on a date with him, that was a great touch. I also loved that Mary was finally ready to admit the relationship, that was lovely. You should do a carry on from this, like leading up to Lily and James' marriage or the birth of Harry or... IDK... More cuteness please? :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Mary and Sirius had actually been suggested by a friend and I'm glad you liked it. I would continue, but I am horrible with updating multi-chapter stories. However much I may love the stories, they never really make it that far.
However, I have written another one-shot by request that I'm unsure whether to post or not.
It's loosely based off the modern Disney Channel show "Austin and Ally" and I've finished writing it but I'm probably just going to upload it to Tumblr if the guidelines for this website say I can't upload it here.
Thanks for the review, and sorry again I can't continue it.


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Review #3, by UnluckyStar57 Seven Years of Lily Evans

12th July 2014:
Hahaha, wow. This is really cute, but it also analyzes Lily and Snape's deteriorating relationship over the years.

I like how people kept telling her that he was dangerous, and as time passed, her defense of him became weaker as he did things that were worse and worse. The fact that you accomplished all of this characterization in 150 words per year at Hogwarts is pretty incredible. :)

You are really good at dialogue. Dialogue was the majority of the story, and I found that I didn't need much description because I knew how the characters looked as they said their lines. Facial expressions, hand gestures, et cetera, was left up to interpretation, and it wsa pretty neat to imagine!

Marlene and Mary's relationship is cute. Sirius was quite shocked, though. :)

Great story!

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~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love hearing the praise coming from places not inside my head. I need to deflate that a little bit :)
(I quite like Marlene and Mary too)
Reviews are life, reviews are love.


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