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Review #1, by MissesWeasley123 Chapter II - Dementia

20th August 2014:
Hello again!

Aww, so Peter. I really liked this side you showed of his. Again, you've put a lot of thought into it. I have lots of questions about his dad and I like seeing that he is quite close with James!

AND OH NO MRS POTTER! :( I feel so sad for her.. and she still hasn't told James! :'( I think it's really cool how she helped fight Gellert, that's interesting. I think Peter seeing the effects of what fighting a dark wizard has had on her might influence him to join Voldemort, so that ties in really well!

You've put in lots of details into this so I think that's what's making this story really exciting to read. Looking forward to seeing what else you have! Great job!

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Review #2, by MissesWeasley123 Chapter I: The Full Moon & the Morning After

20th August 2014:
Hey Fae! I'm here filling in the reviews you earned for the may writing challenge!

AND MARAUDERS
AND REMUS

THIS STORY HAS EVERYTHING!
I'm really really pleased with this story so far, especially the second half with Remus ♥ because I love him and I loved this part:

"None that fancy me mum. Although wait until you get a load of what this third year did to Sirius in the beginning of the term..." --- BECAUSE FIRST OF ALL: That sounds so authentic and REMUS NOT HAVING A GIRLFRIEND IS ALWAYS GOOD NEWS BECAUSE MORE REMUS FOR ME :D

Your descriptions are great and the beginning was bittersweet because Sirius is so cute and yet he's so.. sad. You've crafted him and Regulus so well and of course, Remus too ♥ Great job, I loved reading this, and now, onwards!

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Review #3, by Larissa Chapter II - Dementia

2nd August 2014:
I think you did an excellent job with your characterization of Peter. Even though Sirius is my favorite Marauder I actually enjoyed this chapter more than first. Excited to read the next chapter so update soon.

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Review #4, by Meleessuhh Chapter I: The Full Moon & the Morning After

17th July 2014:
Hi there! I think you're off to a really good start. Your descriptions are great and your characterization is really good too. I like how realistic Remus is and I'm excited to see some interaction with Sirius and his brother. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hello there!!

Thanks for such a lovely review. The Marauders are four of my favorite characters, and it's so wonderful to hear that I've done a good job portraying them so far.

You'll definitely see some more of Sirius and Regulus, although I can't promise it will all be pleasant (:

I have about fifteen chapters written, so it should be updated pretty frequently! Thanks again for stopping by!!


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