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Review #1, by Janner The deep blue sea

14th September 2014:
I'm sorry but I must agree with your last reviewer. The grammar and punctuation are making the story very hard to read, which is a pity because the storyline is very promising. A beta reader would help you to improve your grammar.

Author's Response: That fine I understand :). thank you so much (I didn't pass English, you can see why)

and also what is a Beta reader?

thank you for you review xox

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Review #2, by Dragon Dancer The deep blue sea

17th July 2014:
Okay. I don't mean to be rude, but I am going to be honest. I think your plot line is excellent. What you need to work on is grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. Also watch out for too, and to. I noticed a couple times you used them incorrectly. I think this could be an awesome story, no it is an awesome story, but in order to make it work and have people read it, you need to work on the three things listed above.
I can't wait for the next chapter! lolz Ron and Draco on a boat? this will be good!!;)

Author's Response: that okay, im just rubbish at English and i mean bad i still don't get where to put my comma's and but i will re read the story.
I'm glad you enjoy my chapters. next chapter might be a little mad and thank you for R&R


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Review #3, by marauderslover15 The deep blue sea

17th July 2014:
Another great chapter! I was SO happy to see alot of the Hogwarts students there. Like a little mini-reunion! And Draco so full of himself, just like him. LOL Keep up the good work =D!!!

Author's Response: thanks again and yeah I love them all so much, i'm hoping they sound like there character. Draco is going to become more arrogant then he must soften down to granger.
thank you, hope you read the rest

Papilio xox

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Review #4, by marauderslover15 life never the same with death

17th July 2014:
This is off to a great start. I have some anxiety for Hermione & the group since they are constantly moving. It really shows the impact of war! And I for one DO NOT trust this David gentleman. I am on to the next chapter! I am very curious to see what happens next =D

Btw- there are few grammatical errors, but it's okay. It happens to the best of us (especially me =P)

Author's Response: yay! thanks for reviewing it. yeah Hermione a little scared for her friends. You will see about David ahha.

ik im rubbish at English, I just like writing stories, thank you for ur review I means so much.

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Review #5, by Padfoot213 The deep blue sea

13th July 2014:
Hey that's really good. Way better than my story. I used Instagram name

Author's Response: Thank you so much glad u thought it was good ✌

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Review #6, by incineration life never the same with death

8th July 2014:
It seems really good so far, although it's a little hard to read at times because it's all cramped together. Nothing a space between paragraphs couldn't fix. Other than that I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: awr thank you!! and yeah I change that so it be easier :) the next chapter is nearly done.
thanks for the R&R!


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Review #7, by lizzyher life never the same with death

7th July 2014:
Love it so far please keep writing

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Will do just finishing the next one. thanks for the R&R.


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