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Review #1, by newgenerationlover Chapter Three

29th September 2014:
What can I say, I just love this story :P Chie is a really interesting and unique character. You have done a good job making her such a cynical character while still showing how she actually does have all this hope for the future, just never really letting herself see it so she wouldn't get disappointed again. I hate how Chie is so mean to her mother. Cho is obviously trying so hard to make their relationship work but Chie just doesn't let her *cries* And oh god, James Potter is so adorable. I really hope they get together!! I love how Chie has noted that if it wasn't for her parents divorce and how it changed her, how she then probably would have been just in love with James as he is with her. I think he can teach her how to trust again and how to love again ^_^ They are just so adorable and I just want to hug them!! Haha! I can't wait to keep reading :P

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you really like Chie! She's definitely one of the most interesting (at least in my opinion) characters that I've written. I'm also glad that you like James! Truthfully, I really do love this story at the moment and I'm super excited that you do too!

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Review #2, by HarryGinnyLove88 Chapter Three

29th September 2014:
Hmmm, pretty good :)

write soon...

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Next Chapter is in the works!

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Review #3, by siren song Chapter Two

11th September 2014:
awesome story so far!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #4, by sleepingcarrots Chapter One

29th June 2014:
This. Is brilliant. Please write more soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm working on the second chapter now!

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Review #5, by Fizzing Whizbees Prologue

23rd June 2014:
Might I just say- I am in love. You can feel Cho's heartbreak, and Chie's longing, and Xander's pain, and it all ties together seamlessly. The summary was brilliant, but didn't exactly fit this chapter- which was to be expected, as a prologue. I honestly can't say anything else at the moment but "update soon".

Author's Response: Aww... Thank you! And yeah, the summary won't match till a little later in the story. I'm currently working on the first chapter and hope to have it in for validation within the next couple of days!

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