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Review #1, by Fonzzx In which we meet Scorpius Malfoy

17th June 2014:
You can get a banner by going to the-dark-arts . net and requesting one on the forum :) I can't wait to see where Al ends up!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and the help with the banner! I'll try to post as soon as I can.

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Review #2, by jillybeans To New Adventures

16th June 2014:
I agree with your previous reviewer in that this piece does seem to be cut short, though i totally understand this in the context of an english project. I would recommend that (if youre up for it), you take this one-shot and turn it into the first chapter of some big, albus and rose- centric adventure of a fic.
also (random question) who was the boy sharing their compartment? you could expand on that too, maybe give him a couple of lines?
happy writing!
-Jilly

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! While thinking about expanding it, I though that the boy in the compartment could turn into Al's best friend, just like how James, Serius, and co. met on the Hogwarts express.

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Review #3, by ravenhuffledor To New Adventures

15th June 2014:
That's it?! You just stop? It's a good story, though not extremely exciting. Your description is really good, with them pressing their faces against the window. You could definitely extend on that, would you? Please!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I had to make it short because for this project there were several different pieces of writing, and my teacher didn't want them to be over two pages. I will definitely think of continuing it thought!

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