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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by CantpickwhichWeasleytoravish Falling

11th August 2015:
Lovely, lovely, lovely little one-shot. This is so exuberantly cute and well done up. There are a million reasons why this is great, one being the good incorporation of Tee Shirt (which I already loved anyway). Having Teddy formally ask Bill to start dating Vic is too precious to even deal with. It ended perfectly with the engagement involving all of the Weasley-Potters. Kudos.

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Review #2, by Veritaserum27 Falling

29th September 2014:
Hi Sweetie!

I'm here from the Common Room for Story Search Round 2! I actually had to dig deep to find one of yours that I hadn't reviewed yet! AND I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS STORY!! HOW DID I NOT SEE THIS ONE? You've done perfect job with Teddy/Victoire. They're so incredibly sweet and this just warmed my heart. Their love is just so pure and simple. I like that you didn't try to make this too complicated or have some crazy character flaw in one (or both) of them that they had to get over. This was a nice, heartwarming read. AND THAT PROPOSAL!! Gah, it's was just so perfectly Teddy and Vic that I was melting. I love that the entire story takes place on the couch in the morning - it is the perfect scene to show that they don't need anything more than each other to feel complete.

♥ Beth

Author's Response: Hi honey!

Thanks so much for this lovely review! I'm going to have to get writing a lot faster if I want to keep getting your reviews! You're so sweet and I love all of your reviews. That aside, I'm glad you liked this sweet little one-shot. I do plan on writing a novel about Ted + Vic. It'll be fluff, I promise. They're probably the one couple I won't really hurt that much. Anyway, I love this song and this oneshot, so I'm glad I could share it and make you love it and them as well!!

Thanks so much for the review!

xoxo Sarah ♥


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Review #3, by patronus_charm Falling

7th July 2014:
Hi again lovely!

I actually listened to the song while reading this and it worked so well together! I always love it when that does happen because I can really see where you influence came from then which is really cool, and that meant the lyrics in the story worked even better because it had a context to it in a way which was really cool.

This was just so cool and lovely and cute though with the way Teddy and Victoire loved one another no matter how far apart they were and how well they both knew one another and it was just so cute with all the mini flashbacks and thoughts about him.

I really liked the overall style in this one-shot too, with the sort of dreamy start and the lyrics and how Victoire just had random memories floating through to her mind, and then later on it became more direct with the dialogue in there too and it was nice to have that contrast in there. That line about Teddy dreaming about her was so cute, so cute.

This whole thing was so cute! ♥

-Kiana
House Cup 2014 Review!

Author's Response: Hey hon!
Thanks so much for the review!
xoxo Sarah


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Review #4, by kenpo Falling

5th June 2014:
SARAH THIS WAS SO CUTE. OH MY GOD.

Crying because this is so cute (although to be fair, I was already crying a little when I started reading). I really want to see TFIOS. Even though I didn't love the book as much as everyone else did (it's not that I didn't like it, I just didn't fall in love with it, you know?), I sort of think it might actually be a better movie than book. Is that a crime?

Okay. But holy crap. This was so cute. I think that this is something everyone can relate to, or at least something that everyone wishes they could relate to. This gave me so many warm feelings about how when my boyfriend and I were long distance, everytime we saw each other we'd trade pillowcases, and we still do it even though I see him every week now.

So many warm and fuzzy feelings here.

The song length fit well. While I didn't get to the lines of the song when I heard them, I did pretty much finish off the song when I finished the story.

I'm so in love with this. And it's sad because this fits really well into my headcanon about them (apart from being an Auror), and I just know that in my universe, Teddy dies young and I'm sad about it!!!

I want to write more Teddy/Vic.

I loved how she said he was beautiful. Not sexy or hot, but beautiful. Men can be beautiful, too!!!

Okay, the proposal was a little cheesy, but hey, isn't that the point of a story like this??

I can totally imagine Teddy going to ask if he can date her. That would probably be terrifying, right?

I'm so in love with this. I want to just keep rambling about it, but I'm worried that somebody is going to take my spot in the battle, and... this was just so sweet and so nice and cute and alsdjfaoweijf. You know? lasjdfoiaew.

Really wonderful job. I feel so warm and fuzzy now. I want to go write fluff but I don't have any fluffy WIPs. Darn you!!!

Seriously. I might just go write a fluffy one-shot now. OH. I'LL WRITE CHARLIE'S CHAPTER OF MY WEASLEY THING.

Okay. Good plan.

This was so cute. I can't. I'm dying over here. The fuzzies are going to kill me. If I don't contact you in the next three days, you should be charged with manslaughter because I suffocated in your fluff.

And on that note.

Fantastic story!!!

-Georgia

Author's Response: Okay, this review is literally so perfect and not worthy of my lame response. I am so flattered that you liked the story so much, and I just ahh! Thank you! I was just so inspired by the song and tfios and it worked together into this little bundle of cute and I'm just so glad you liked it. There will be more teddy and vic on it's way eventually. SO you might be suffocated some more ;)

Thanks again for this perfect review.

xoxo Sarah


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Review #5, by BelleIndigo Falling

5th June 2014:
Aww, how sweet! I normally don't read next-gen fanfiction. HOWEVER, I love Teddy and this fic was stinkin' cute!
Good job! :D

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked it so much! xoxo Sarah

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Review #6, by DracosGirl012 Falling

4th June 2014:
Agh. I am so excited for the movie that you mentioned in your author's note ;)
This was a really cute fic! I think you described Teddy & Victorie's relationship perfectly. :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it!! xoxo Sarah

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