Reading Reviews for An Unexpected Alliance
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Ciggy A Strange Dream

9th August 2014:
So far enjoying your story. Its taking a little while to develop, but that's ok. I don't want to stop reading because I believe the next chapter will really start progressing. Please hurry with the next chapter. Thank you

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Review #2, by papilio A New Guest

21st July 2014:
very fun to read hehe !!! cant believe the house elf being so rude to Hermione.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it. There will be more with Winky and Hermione later on too! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #3, by papilio Malfoy Manor

19th July 2014:
really enjoyed this chapter. felt sorry for Draco though.
looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad I could capture some emotion in Dragon's character. Next chapter will be up very soon!

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Review #4, by papilio Confusion and Promises

30th June 2014:
I really like this story. I abit like till death do us part (my favourite fanfic) continue writing. xox

Author's Response: I've read Til Death Do Us Part, and it was great! It's definitely where I received some inspiration, but I assure you once my fanfic gets going, the two stories will have more differences and not be comparable. Thanks for the review!

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Review #5, by blackdiamond Confusion and Promises

29th June 2014:
What I am thinking! Your writing is well done. I like the start of your character developement. The story line is intriguing and set up for suspense ,adventure and romance. It is a story I would very much like to read. However- you say it is your first story and go on to tell us how busy you are and after two chapters are having difficulty being inspired to write. I'm sorry as you list this as a novel- I don't have much faith you will get far or ever complete this. I will put this on my reading list to check on from time to time and see how you do. As good as story is after two chapters it is risky to invest in this beginning WIP endeavor. I will check back on your response and if you can reassure me of updates and completion; I would be interested in this story. Take care of yourself and keep writing. Thank you. I have read so many WIP great stories and have been left disappointed so many times. I understand Real Life gets busy and difficult but then I think write if you must for yourself and get feed back some other way rather than leave readers hanging and story incompete. Why start a story if you have no idea how to take it to the end. Please forgive me as I have tried to give you balance on your great start to this interesting story yet respond to what you have told me as a reader in your author notes.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! After reading it, I realized I needed to spend some time preparing. I've created an outline for my story- it's roughly 33 chapters plus an epilogue. I've been there too when you are reading a story you love, but it ends poorly due to the creator losing interest or not being able to complete it. I will finish this story if it is the death of me ;). I'm aiming for a new chapter every two weeks starting July 5th. Please continue reading and review, and thanks again!

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Review #6, by a fan Protecting the Muggleborn

4th June 2014:
you have a story here

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!

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Review #7, by Lo_bo Protecting the Muggleborn

4th June 2014:
Quite a lovely story so far! I hope it isn't to predictable ;) Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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