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Review #1, by ravenhuffledor Ella Green, 11: Witch.

30th May 2014:
Nice story, maybe Ella has a distant cousin who's magical, and by pure coincidence, they become best friends. I'm not saying you should use this idea, it's just an idea.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! :)

We actually had already decided that Ella's mom is cousins with Colin creevey, but we also already have her best friend chosen and stuff, and there's little chance they have any vaguely close family in common. Ella's a character from our novella, and we already have the rest of her story planned out. It's an idea though, and we'll keep it in mind. Thanks for the feedback! :)

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