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Review #1, by PoisonQuill First Day of School! First Day of School!

3rd August 2014:
I like this so far! Especially Marley's voice. A few of the sentences in Chapter 2 I think could have used commas or something, but I think you fixed that in Chapter 3. I can't wait to read more, it's pretty interesting! Good job :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the comment; its nice to hear that people like it. I'm working on the next chapter at the mo' so it should be up sometime this week!

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Review #2, by ruthdobble Welcome to Hogwarts

17th June 2014:
I like this story :) quick question, is the whole story going to be in her second year? Because I'd quite like to see teenage Marley, I picture her as a bit more comfortable around the school, a bit of a tomboy yet with a girly air, I think that she'd have her hair in a braid by the way, just saying :) So yeah, it's very good :)

Author's Response: No, I'm hoping to get through early years quickly so I can move on to the fun teenage stuff :) I'm just not quite sure how much I want to cover.

That's how I picture her too! Not too fussed with how she looks but still manages to look good, you know?

Thanks a ton for taking the time to review. I really appreciate hearing that other people like my story. Hope to hear from you again!

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Review #3, by ladyrae The New Girl

27th May 2014:
Interesting first chapter. I like the narrative style. Can't wait to see the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You were the first one. I appreciate the encouragement.
I'm hoping to have the second chapter up by the end of the week. Now that school is out I should be able to update pretty regularly. Thanks again!

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