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Review #1, by Veritaserum27 The Descendants

23rd May 2014:
Hello!

I was just poking through the recently added stories and I came upon this one. Seeing it had no reviews, I decided to give it a look!

This is an incredibly original idea! I love it! It is exactly the type of thing Voldemort would do, planning to live on the only way he had left. You wrote it so that it sounds so creepy!

How did it take seven years for the woman to become pregnant? That was a nice touch.

I liked the way you started the chapter with the four of them looking at the girl and describing the way she looked. It is obvious she is a parseltongue and even has a pet snake! Also, she is clearly a very powerful witch.

This is a really good start. Thanks for the great story!

~Beth (Veritaserum27)

Author's Response: Aw... Thank you for that lovely review! It really means a lot to me! :) This is my first story and everything so it was a major confidence booster! So again, thank you!

~Weezy


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