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Review #1, by HermyLuna2 The Storm

30th April 2015:
Aww, I feel sad that there are so much Sev/Lily stories like this one with no reviews at all! Maybe it is because their love is mutual here. I liked reading something else for a change, and your portrayal of it was gentle and subtle enough. Sometimes it was a little bit straightforward (for example, people often do not say the things they're hardly aware of themselves, for example that Severus says he thought Dark magic would impress Lily), the metaphors were a little off, or it seemed like you hadn't thought it fully through. But nothing is perfect, and it was a touching story. 'Having their usual fun with him' was a really sad sentence. I like how you described how things slipped away from Severus and he just went back to the bad place he had started in.

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