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Review #1, by MadiMalfoy pretty silver butterflies

8th July 2014:
Hello hello! Here's your last review for your merlin challenge prizes! :)

Well, isn't that just some of the trippiest writing ever!! It's such a different way of writing a character that it is truly unique. You really have me guessing on who the women are! The mistress tip makes me lean towards Astoria Greengrass and Pansy Parkinson, Draco Malfoy's flames/wife canonically.

The Voice in Lily's head is so seamless I had to believe it really was just a voice in her head until the scene with the two women. Honestly, that is probably the most chilling part about the whole piece--we as readers don't know the full story as to why they chose Lily or why she even has a voice in her head in the first place. The fact it drove her to suicide speaks wonders for those dealing with issues like Lily has here (although obviously of a non-magical occurence) and how difficult it can be on a day-to-day basis to continue being strong and put on a brave face. You really captured that well, especially with the library scene. Just well done, all around!
~MadiMalfoy x

Author's Response: Hello hello! Thank you so much, and apologies for the time I took to answer them, oh my word.

Well, thank you so much! I honestly have no clue what to think of this now, hah. Yes, your guesses as to who them women are were correct, although I might need to make it more oblique. :/

Oh, I'm so glad that you think so! I'm raelly glad that you liked this oneshot even as a standalone, because you're right, I was kind of terrible ere by not giving you any context whatsoever - either way, I'm really glad that you were still able to read this and enjoy it. I'm so glad you think I captured Lily's emotions well!

Thank you for an amazing challenge and the lovely reviews, Madi!


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Review #2, by Lorz Potter pretty silver butterflies

8th May 2014:
Wow I really liked this story. It was admittedly quite creepy but it was turned into a mystery very well. The only people I could think of as the women were the reporters from trapped. Usually I'm not into darker stories but this was very good. Please tell who the women were!!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I was aiming for creepy, so I think I got that right, and I'm so glad you think that it was twisted around well, haha. No, it's not the reporters from Trapped, and now you've got me thinking about expanding this into a two- or three-shot. Whoo, I'm so glad I could get your attention with this darker story even though you're not usually a fan, it means a lot to me!

Thanks for a lovely little review, it made my night! ♥

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