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Review #1, by kenpo Acceptance

27th May 2014:
Hey! Happy forum-versary!

This was a delightful one-shot! I think this was a great approach to the challenge. I love the idea of having Slytherins in these different categories. Being a neutral Slytherin, as you described them, can't be easy.

I love Blaise's characterisation! You did an awesome job with it, and I have this great sense of the type of person he is. He seems nice. I get the feeling that you've got other stories that feature him... am I right? Or are you just good at developing characters?

The ending was fantastic. Hermione's wave and then the line about the other students sitting a little bit closer to them was just... fantastic.

Really, this was a fantastic one-shot. Well done!

-Georgia

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Review #2, by LittleLionGirl Acceptance

21st May 2014:
Hey Sam! I'm here for the May Slytherin Review "challenge". First let me say 64 stories?!?! You really are committed to this site! After a long look I simply had to choose this story to respond to. I really enjoy the way you describe Blaise, I've always thought he was one of the better Snakes in the Pit as well :) I think you did an amazing job addressing the fact that not every Slytherin during the war was in the war. You really made me hope Blaise got the early acceptance letter, and I was really pleased that he did. The Hermione bit near the close really was my favorite part of the story. Keep doing what you do, because you are extraordinary at it!
XOXOXOX,
LLG

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Review #3, by HufflePuff_Blitz Acceptance

3rd May 2014:
Hi Sam! This was good :) I was worried reading it at first because I couldn't see how it worked with the challenge but when I got to the end I was like "oh!" and reread it again. I like how you kept to the challenge but at a kind of low key level :)
I'll get back to you on the results later :)
-Kyle

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Review #4, by alicia and anne Acceptance

3rd May 2014:
It's Blaise and I'm so excited! :D

Aw no Harry! ;( But at least he has Theo with him, although I feel sad that poor Blaise is without Theo as well. Everyone needs Theo!

Oooo I wonder what letter Blaise is waiting for...

Oh he missed Theo a lot! *hugs him* Don't worry Blaise! Theo loves you! ... just not in the same way as he loves Harry... although Theo/Blaise... Thaise. Bleo... Mmmm it could work?

I really like how you mentioned what's happened to all of the other Slytherins, it's good to see what they're all up to.

I'm feeling really sad about this letter and Blaise not recieving it and I don't even know what it is!! Such mystery! So Tense! I can't take it!!! :P

Oh no! Blaise don't think like that! *hugs him extra tight*

Awww I like Astoria! She's a good friend for Blaise, he needs someone to kick him into action.

Ahh the letter is here! I'm so scared. I hope he gets in! No he has to get in!

AH BLAISE IS IN! HE IS IN! I'M SO HAPPY! *jumps up and down in excitement!*

Aww go Hermione at the end! I really loved that!

Yay! This was brilliant Sam! I feel so happy now, I'm so glad for Blaise :D

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