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Review #1, by larissa_allstar Decisions

21st July 2014:
Hello! I love reading marauders stories and yours is off to quite a great start c:

I was a little worried that your OC would be a little bit Mary Sue like, just due the fact she's a "prodigy." However so far you're doing a brilliant job of making her seem talented, while also having flaws. I love that she's showing emotion, after-all we're all human. It's also intriguing to me that she's in Slytherin. During this time period it must have been super tough, especially if you went against the grain and didn't side with the deatheaters. I'm curious to see how Nelly's spying will end up. If she gets caught she'll be in so much danger :o

I feel like Lily and Nelly could be great friends, they seem to be quite similar. Sirius seems to be quite the jerk so far, but it's understandable with his upbringing that he wouldn't be the most friendly with pureblood Slytherins. I hope that he'll open up to Nelly and hopefully they can become closer [;

Continue soon! (:

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I always appreciate long and descriptive reviews :), it always encourages me to update. So hopefully I can add another chapter soon and you can continue reading ^-^

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Review #2, by Meleessuhh Decisions

21st July 2014:
Hi there! I think you're off to a good start--even though Nelly is shy and kind of awkward, she still acts like a Slytherin. Update soon :) keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #3, by MyDefinition Social Reject

5th May 2014:
This is great! Hope you continue!

Author's Response: Thank you! When I have the free time and inspiration I'll, of course, continue :)

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