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Review #1, by ohmymerlin solstice

25th October 2015:
omg Kristin

I cried. Well I had to hold it furiously in because Mum is right next to me and I think she'd be suspicious if I just burst into tears.


This was such a wonderful ending to the story, even though it was really sad and I feel so sorry for Reg because he just got in too deep and although his sacrifice made it able to kill Voldemort, it's just so sad that he was only a teenager -- HE WAS ONLY A BOY.

Regulus is a wonderful character but you've made him ten times better than I ever imagined him. The fact that it was only one Muggleborn that made him change his whole perspective and loyalties is truly amazing. He's such a good person and I LOVE IT.

Anyway, this was such a wonderful story. I'm so glad you asked me to review it because I'd probably would've never read it! Mostly because I'm lazy :P

It was such a beautiful story and I'm so upset that it couldn't be resolved that Summer and Reg live happily ever after (as friends) and there's no Voldemort or no war and everyone is happy and smily just like Summer ahhh I made myself sad :P

Seriously though, this is one of the best stories I've ever read. I absolutely adored it! ♥


- Kayla :)

Author's Response: You are brave for trying to read a sad story when people are around! :P I remember when I finished reading the Deathly Hallows, years ago - my dad came to ask me a question and found me curled up on the sofa, sobbing over the book and surrounded by tissues. Awk :P

That was such a horrible scene to write. As much as I hated it, it really needed to be something that horrible to push Regulus over the edge and get out.

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked the ending! I think that whole scene with him in the cave is one of my favourite scenes I've ever written in any story. And yes GAH his story is so sad! He was just a kid who got mixed up in the wrong things, sacrificed so much, and was a hero but no one knew or cared. I'm glad you thought I did him justice, it's so wonderful to hear that you liked my characterisation of him and how he changed! Thank you!

I know, it's possibly the most depressing ending ever; basically everyone dies except Kreacher. I'm really glad that you thought the story was beautiful though, thanks!

O__O Wow, THANK YOU! that is such an incredible thing to hear and I'm so flattered. Thanks for reading and for your amazing reviews, Kayla! ♥

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Review #2, by ohmymerlin syzygy

24th October 2015:




Please let that last line mean the end of summer as in the season as in the NOT CAPITALISED SUMMER AS IN A NOUN NOT A PRONOUN

Anyway, as you may have gathered I am here from my review thread again lol anD I'M NOT VERY HAPPY WITH THAT ENDING

Jokes, it's a fantastic way to end a chapter. The way you wove that in was astounding and so clever. At first I was wishing you'd go into more detail about the end of seventh year and seeing Summer again but with that last line it made it fit really well because time is just a blur and you blink and it's over within a second!

I just noticed a little thing in Summer's letter. You said this:
I know how it must be for you.

And I was wondering if you meant 'I know how hard it must be for you.' ? It does technically make sense what you said, but I thought you may have left out a word.

I LOVED how you had him find Horcruxes. That was so fantastic and the way you just placed it in there makes it so much more accurate for canon! I find it so wonderful that you managed to weave that within your story! That was so clever!

Regulus' character development is so fantastic! I think you've done it really well and I liked that he was uncomfortable in the Muggle hospital but he found that there weren't that many differences!

I LOVED how you said he got along with Anne and that her maternal characteristics made him closer with her. That's so sweet, and so sad because we all know that his mother wasn't very... maternal. Sure she adored him but it's nothing like a true mother's love. And the fact that Regulus would willingly write to her as well was just proof of how much he's grown.

I LOVED this chapter! I'm going to read on because I won't be able to wait!

10/10 of course!

Feel free to request again! Your writing is phenomenal.

- Kayla :)

Author's Response: ... yup. well, you've read the rest - I've got nothing to say for myself on that one :p SORRY I'M EVIL.

Wah, thank you though! It really means a lot to me that you liked the ending of the chapter despite not liking it (that made more sense in my head). And yeah, the idea being that time and detail kind of fade away as Summer does as well.

About her letter - I think I did mean what I wrote, but your version probably makes more sense :p

The horcrux thing was something that actually just kind of fell together as I was finishing writing the chapter - the idea suddenly came to me and I couldn't ignore it, as it fit in so well with where I was headed with the story. And I love developing backstory for canon events that aren't really explained in the books. ahh, thank you!

I'm so glad to hear you liked Reg's character development as well. This is the chapter where he actively begins changing because he has to make choices now - and yeah, that must have been eye-opening for him as someone who's been raised to hate Muggles and then to find out they're not that different from him.

His relationship with Anne was one of my favourite things to write, because of how much it changes Regulus - Anne is better at showing she cares about Regulus than his own mother is, and he really craves that kind of appreciation. Not to mention that she's a Muggle and Regulus sees this very human side of Muggles now - he KNOWS that what he grew up believing is wrong. I think it's around this point where he goes from being on two sides to being just on one side and too afraid to leave the other.

eeep! Thank you ♥ You are such a wonderful reviewer and these two reviews absolutely made my whole week. I can't tell you how many times I've re-read them :p Thanks so much. ♥ ♥

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Review #3, by ohmymerlin equinox

19th October 2015:
Hey, Kristin! You've probably forgotten, but you requested this in my review thread about thirteen years ago and I've finally got my stuff together to finally review. I'm so sorry for the ridiculous delay!

And I'm even more annoyed because I really love this story and for a very long time I've completely missed out on this! Shame on me!

So far, I don't think you've 'told' that much. (You asked if you're telling too much and not showing enough) I think you've managed to weave it in quite nicely and first chapters often do have that 'telling' aspect to it at first, but I don't think it's overboard! I do think you could go into more detail about Regulus' emotions and his conflicts between choosing sides, especially when he opens up to Summer in the broom closet (saucy, Reg ;))

I think you've characterised Regulus extremely well! And I love Summer! I feel like she's too laidback about being Muggleborn, though. Especially in that time but I admire her bravery. I think she's a fantastic character. I especially love that she's in Hufflepuff! ;)

Also, that cliffhanger is very effective! I had to resist pressing the 'next' button just to know what happens! I can't wait to keep reading! WHAT DOES SUMMER WANT TO TELL REGULUS AHHH

(My assignment is screaming at me from the distance though, unfortunately)

This was such a wonderful opening chapter! I think you've done an awesome job on it! I really loved it! It's so sad that Regulus feels so trapped :( I just WISH he'd been as stubborn and courageous as Sirius to be like 'I DON'T CARE ANYMORE I WANT TO DO MY OWN THING!!' but it's so dangerous for him :( You manage to evoke a lot of sympathy for Regulus, and I really admire that! He's such an interesting and complex character and I honestly think you've really nailed him.

Feel free to request again! I'll definitely try not to leave it for another five months... I'm so sorry!

- Kayla :)

Author's Response: Haha, this was like the best surprise ever because I'd totally forgotten that request! It's like finding $20 in your pocket that you didn't remember you left in there. :D

Thanks, that's really great to hear that the show/tell ratio is all right. I think first chapters do tend to have a lot of 'tell' and it's pretty hard to avoid, especially in a short but very comprehensive fic like this one.

At this point, Regulus hasn't really figured out his emotions yet. I see him as the sort of person who tries to shove his emotions down if he doesn't know what to do with them, and I think I point that out more in a later chapter. He's just really confused here as things are just starting to change.

It's wonderful to hear that Regulus is characterised well, thanks! Summer - she is like the dictionary definition of optimist, to a fault haha. People already know she's a Muggle-born, so what can she really do about it other than be laid back? And yeee Hufflepuffs! :D

Ahaha, I'm glad the cliffhanger is effective ;) but yeah I guess real life and pesky assignments really do have to take priority! Good luck on it!

So glad you enjoyed this chapter and thanks so much for reading! guuhh your point at the end about wishing Regulus had had more courage - this is definitely something I felt while writing the story, haha! He is a really fascinating and deep character though and I really love him. I'm so glad you liked him too!

Thanks so much for your wonderful review, Kayla! ♥

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Review #4, by cherry_pop94 syzygy

10th July 2015:
Hi Kristin! Here for our swap!

Oh my god. The revelation that Summer has cancer just broke my heart into pieces. I'll admit, I tend to stay away from stories about cancer (I mean original fiction, I've never come across fanfic about cancer before). The topic is just very close to me and honestly, I find most OF about cancer very cliche.

However, as I said, this is the first time I've ever seen it in fanfic, so that's totally new for me! Also, the title of this chapter is fantastic, though I cannot for the life of me figure out how to pronounce it.

The relationship between Summer and Regulus seems really natural at this point. He never was quite like the other Death Eaters and it certainly shows here. Regulus is very impulsive in this chapter and quite possibly the least sneaky person ever. That lie was never a good idea! So easy to unravel!!

But his growing relationship with Anne is quite lovely. It's heartbreaking though because Summer isn't going to make it and a mother shouldn't have to bury her child and it just isn't fair. I am hoping Summer doesn't die though.

I feel like if she died at this point, she'd be a bit more like a plot device, here to further Regulus's journey of self discovery and be his reason for defying the Dark Lord. It makes her less of a character I think.

Still, I really loved this chapter. It truly did break my heart a little. I can't wait to read more!


Author's Response: Hi! aw, well I'm glad the revelation about her having cancer didn't put you off reading. I'm sory to hear that it's a personal topic for you - it's a topic that is very close to me as well, Summer is based on someone in my family.

ooh thanks about the title! It's one of my favourite words - and its pronounced Sih-zuh-gee :P

I'm really glad you like the friendship betwen Regulus and Summer - I hope Summer fels like more of a character to you now than you mentioned in the previous chapter. Regulus yeah, not as sneaky as he wants to be. He's definitely struggling with being on both sides.

I'm glad to hear you like that Regulus became close to Anne as well. as for Summer's future, you know I can't tell you that yet :p if that's the case though, aren't we all just plot devices, in a way? heh. Anyway - thank you so much for the swap!

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Review #5, by cherry_pop94 equinox

8th July 2015:
Hi Kristin!

Here for our swap! And my 101st review!! Yippeee!!!

I loved this chapter so much! It's such a sweet look into Regulus's character - torn between his parents and his brother. He really is a good person, like Summer said, not always nice, but good. I like that you made that distinction.

And Summer is such a wonderful character! Right now, she seems a bit too perfect, like Regulus's own manic pixie dream girl, so I hope we learn more about her in the later chapters. But I really do love how you've characterized Regulus. He's afraid, he just wants to fit in, he's not one to break the mold, I suppose.

It makes sense I think for the circumstances of his life. I really do sympathize with him here because I think many of us would be similar in his situation.

Anyway, I'm really excited to read the next chapter!!


Author's Response: Hi Stefanie! Yay! Congrats on 101 :D

Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you like this look into Regulus' character. And yes, there is a huge distinction between nice and good - definitely something I explored a lot in this story.

I'm glad you like Summer! Ahh - yes - you know, I had always kind of wondered if Summer came across as a Mary Sue in this first chapter, as at this point Regulus doesn't really know her that well and just sees someone who (he thinks) is just a Good Person and far better than he could be. They do get to know one another a lot more in the next chapter - but if I'd included it here, it would have been far too long of a chapter :p I'd love to know what you think of her if you eventually read on.

That's wonderful to hear that you like the characterization of Regulus and that he is relatable - after all he's just a teenager in a difficult situation - who wouldn't be indecisive?

Thanks so much for the swap! ♥

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Review #6, by merlins beard solstice

23rd June 2015:
Hi! I'm (finally) here for the review I owe you.

I actually typed this yesterday, but apparently it didn't send.

If I had more time right now I'd review all three chapters of this, but sadly I have a lot going on this week, so the third chapter gets my attention.

I love the characters you created, the perpetually happy hufflepuff muggleborn who can't find it in her to fear or hate even a Death Eater, someone who'd kill her if he had to (in the beginning of course).
Summer's Mum is probably my favourite character in this whole thing. I love that she stays in contact with Regulus, and tells him stuff his friend doesn't want to burden him with.

This is the first time Regulus ever experiences what it really means to have a family who cares about you, no matter what. His own parents would turn on him as quickly as they did on Sirius, should he decide to go his own way.

I love that Regulus isn't evil through and through... He's an overlooked character for sure, and we have a lot of freedom when writing about him.
I think that you came up with an explanation on HOW Regulus knew about the Horcrux(es) is awesome! that's something I was always wondering about and your explanation really makes sense.

This story is heartbreaking and really sad to read, and it's written so well! I felt all the right emotions in the right places.

I'm glad that Summer and Regulus weren't a couple... that wouldn't have felt quite right with Regulus' personality. I loved the line where you hinted that Regulus could have seen them together, had he not been a Death Eater.

I'm so glad that this is the story I picked. Your writing is so high-quality, I'll have to check out your other stories soon. Look out for more reviews once my semester is over :D

And thank you so much for making this a swap, I LOVED the review you left me!


Author's Response: Hi! No worries on the delay - this was an absolutely amazing review and worth the wait ♥

Thank you so much - I'm thrilled to hear that you love the characters, especially Anne! I think Regulus' friendship with her was a huge step for him - realising that he can relate to Muggles and that they can be kind, even more so than his own family. I also wanted to show through the honesty of Anne's letters the downside to Summer's positivity and how she's not as flawless as Regulus used to believe. I love your assessment of what it means to Regulus to see a really caring family.

I really couldn't see Regulus as evil. He's only 16 when he becomes a death eater - just a confused teenager who doesn't know where he belongs and ends up on the wrong side. And his indecisiveness and feelings of confusion on who he is were something which, as I was writing, I found Regulus so relatable. Thank you, I'm glad you like the back story on how he finds out about Horcruxes and that you think it makes sense!

Wah, thank you! I'm sorry for breaking your heart, but that was really the only way his story could turn out, I think. :-/

I'm glad you liked the friendship aspect too. There really aren't enough stories that are just about friends and not romance, and I really couldn't have seen Regulus and Summer any other way. He just needed a good friend at this point.

Aw, I'm really glad that you picked this story too! I have a special place in my heart for this story. And wow thank you, I really appreciate your compliments about my writing ♥ You are too kind! Thanks so much for the review :)

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Review #7, by SunshineDaisies solstice

4th May 2015:
For the record, I had to read this chapter IMMEDIATELY after the last one because I thought I'd read the last paragraphs wrong. No such luck, it seems. :(

Okay so now that I've mostly recovered from my emotions I think I'm good to leave you a review with slightly less capslock and crying. But I only promise slightly less.

This is amazing. Reg's character development and his entire arc are just perfect. I love how disinterested and scared he became here, it's very much inline with canon, and perfectly inline with the events of this story. You can just tell that he wants out so badly but you can't just leave the Death Eaters. I love you you can really see both sides of his character in this chapter as well, he's kind (to an extent), but still self preserving. He wants to help Anne, but he's afraid. (Did you have to kill Anne???) Then he volunteers Kreacher for a mission because he thought it would make him happy. How many wizards do you think do things to make their house elves happy? One. His name being Regulus Black. AND HE WON'T LET KREACHER DRINK THE POTION AGAIN. THAT IS HOW YOU DO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. AH. There is just so much growth in him over this story, and in this chapter in particular he really comes into his own. I love reading about characters like this, and you've done a spectacular job. Okay and this line:

ďIím not a child,Ē I said. But I was, really; I was still just a teenager, and this was no place for me.

THIS JUST SHOWS SO MUCH ABOUT HIM AND HIS CHARACTER AND IT'S PERFECT. And the fact that he intentionally did not look at the bodies on the floor, I just want to hold him.

I love how you created the plot to really push him into the character he's meant to be (I am still bitter about Anne and Alan though I'm never getting over that), both directly and indirectly. He grew so much as a person after watching Anne die, which I think was very conscious of him. And you have him figuring out the Horcrux because HE DID RESEARCH TO HELP HIS BEST FRIEND NOT DIE. That is so clever! And so great and fantastic and it hurts my heart a little but in the best way possible. Reading about him in the cave warmed my heart and broke it at the same time. It seemed so much like he was trying to atone for Summer's death, or even just prove to her that he was worthy of her friendship. And it just :'(

I also really, really liked that you did not have Regulus and Summer fall in love. That seems to be so common in media that we forget friendship is just as important than romance. If not more. It can be just as powerful as romantic love or filial love or whatever else kind of love there is. And I liked how you addressed it in the first chapter. Maybe we would have been in love. But they weren't and it was so lovely to read. It fits in so well with the overall themes of Harry Potter.

I think this chapter is your strongest overall in terms of showing vs telling. I didn't notice any areas where it made things lag, the areas where you were telling were very suited and really helped advance the plot.

Overall, this is so, so good. SO. GOOD. Okay I'm done rambling now.:)

Author's Response: WAHH THIS REVIEW ♥ Thank you, you're amazing!

wow, thank you - it is such a compliment to hear that my writing kept you interested enough to go to the next chapter immediately and that it made you emotional - I'm sorry about tears but I am really flattered, thank you! *hands over tissue*

*insert gif of Boromir saying "One does not simply walk out of the Death Eaters." :P I'm so thrilled you like Regulus' character arc in this story, and how he basically sticks around just because doesn't know how to get out - and it's so great to hear that the different sides of his personality show here. I really enjoyed writing Kreacher actually - especially from such a sympathetic point of view - and I figured that not all wizards were as cruel to their house elves as the Malfoys were to Dobby. Kreacher was always so attached to Regulus and so I figured REgulus had to have cared a lot about him. Wah thank you, I'm so glad you liked the character development and that you thought I did it well!

:( sorry, I know, I do feel badly about Summer's parents but it needed to happen to push Regulus over the edge to the point where he'd do something as drastic as betraying Voldemort. I'm glad you liked how he found out about the Horcrux! I just loved the irony of the idea, as he found Voldemort's secret by trying to help a Muggle-born. The cave - I think that was the most intense scene I've ever written! and thank you, it's such a compliment to hear you say you felt all those feelings about it.

ah! I'm so glad that you liked the friendship angle and especially that you thought it fit so well with the HP themes! There is something so pure about friendship and I couldn't see the story any other way. Besides, there are far too few stories out there which focus on friendship and not romance.

THANK YOU so much for your incredible reviews, I'm positively over the moon. ♥ You're a fantastic reviewer!

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Review #8, by SunshineDaisies syzygy

3rd May 2015:

Okay, so if that wasn't clear, I liked it a lot!

Regulus's development in this chapter was absolutely SPOT. ON. You can absolutely see him growing from a lost boy to someone who absolutely knows what's right and what's wrong and has somehow ended up on the wrong side. It's so perfect.

Summer is BRILLIANT. I adore her. I love her optimism and acceptance and her silent sort of bravery. She's wonderful.

Her parents were lovely as well! Hospitals are always awkward, especially when you don't know the other visitors, and I think you displayed that very well. I love how Anne sends Regulus little side notes. That's just so, so touching.

I think this chapter is a LOT better in terms of showing vs telling. The pace seemed a lot more constant. I wanted to suggest adding a bit more action and detail in near the end. I'm hoping you don't have this experience, but people dying from cancer to tend to just... fade away. I think that could create a really vivid, powerful image. However, that last paragraph is just spectacular, and I'm not sure it would work quite as well with the extra detail.


I'm like 90% sure this isn't everything I wanted to touch on but now I'm all emotional. I've read the next chapter and definitely plan on leaving you a more comprehensive review there. :)

Author's Response: Ahh, sorry. I should have warned you this fic stomps on hearts. :( But I am so glad to hear that you liked it despite it punching you in the feels.

Wow, thank you! This is really so wonderful to hear that you liked his character development. I think that may be why the first chapter is the weakest - because Reg is just so apathetic then, and this is where he first starts to care, so it all gets more intense.

I am so glad to hear you like Summer as well, and her parents. :) gah, I loved writing the friendship between Summer's parents and Reg, as this is like the ultimate thing he was taught to hate (as they're Muggles) but he finds himself appreciating it so much.

That's great to hear about the pace! I did intentionally leave some detail out towards the end, actually for the reason you mentioned, my idea being that the detail fades out as Summer fades away. and yeah unfortunately, this chapter is based on personal experience - Summer was mostly inspired by a family member.

I think the last line in this chapter is one of my favourites in the whole story, so thank you - I am so glad to hear it was powerful.

Thank you so much for your review!! ♥ I'm off to respond to your next one now!

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Review #9, by SunshineDaisies equinox

3rd May 2015:
LOOK AT HOW FAST I AM. I've been avoiding responsibility. Also, I feel like you will appreciate the fact that I am writing this review in the expanded review box. IT'S SO NICE.

This definitely hits ALL of my interests, so thank you for that! I've been very interested in Regulus lately, so I'm always pleased to read more about him.

I think you've done a really wonderful job of exploring his character here. I love the way he went from a neutral force to a Death Eater, without actually losing his underlying neutrality. I also really liked how he joined the Death Eaters because he was so caught up in everything and it made him feel powerful. It made him very real, and it really showed his age. He very much seems like a teenage kid caught up in stuff he didn't fully understand. When writing about characters like this, I feel like a lot of times writers forget that they're writing teenagers not fully grown adults. Reading an accurate description of a seventeen year old is so nice.

I loved Regulus's voice in this as well. You really showed his thought process, and I think you've painted his character very well. He seems a bit detached and unemotional, which is so fitting based on the fact that he repeatedly says he was taught to never show excess emotion. It's SUCH a good fit.

I think Summer is absolutely wonderful! I love her kindness and friendliness (WHAT A GOOD PUFF SHE IS), and I love that it doesn't make her weak. When Regulus calls her a Mudblood, she reacts appropriately, but doesn't hold it against him.That shows such a strength in character, and I really like seeing it portrayed as such. She's also pretty darn funny, which is always nice to read.

I think the pace was good, but the chapter did lag a bit in places. It's on the longer side and it covers quite a bit of time, so the laggy bits are going to be hard to avoid. It usually showed up when you were describing passages of time, which really is to be expected. It's telling rather than showing, and while it's definitely necessary here, it just isn't as interesting as the parts where there's action happening.

That said, the parts where there IS action happening are very interesting! I felt just as captivated by Summer as Regulus did and I was so anxious about his friends finding out. I'm so curious about what happened to Summer now and I'M SO CONCERNED FOR HER. So it definitely holds reader interest.

And as a side note, I really love the chapter titles. So clever. :)

Author's Response: Wow, that was really fast! And yay for the expanded review box! That totally changed my life omg.

Thank you - it's great to hear that about Regulus. This is exactly the idea I was trying to convey - he wasn't EVIL, but a confused teenager who was just caught up in things he wasn't ready for. And aah, that means SO MUCH to hear you say that he seemed real. That's what I try for, and basically the best thing to hear as a writer- thank you!

I'm thrilled to hear that about Regulus' voice as well, and that his detachment seems to fit with his upbringing. That's really wonderful to hear about Summer as well, I'm so glad you like her! Haha, she is SUCH a Hufflepuff :D I really like your analysis of her character too, that her ability to forgive makes her strong.

Yeah, the long time span was one of the things I'd been concerned about this chapter, and I definitely see that it has some sections of telling. I am glad to hear that you found it appropriate though- that the telling seemed okay here as it skips through time. The last two chapters are a much shorter time span so hopefully less telling - I'd be interested to know what you think if you read those. Regarding the action scenes though, I'm so glad you find those interesting and that the story holds your interest.

Aw, thanks about the chapter titles ;) This was a really wonderful review, thank you so much!!

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Review #10, by toomanycurls solstice

25th January 2015:
I thought that with Summer's death itself not getting much in the way of attention in this chapter that I would not cry. But I was wrong. Regulus' lonliness was very profound after Summer died and you had to go poke his loss of Sirius as a friend and brother as well. gah. This isn't what made me cry though.

When Kreacher left to help Voldemort I was interested to see where you would take this emotionally and I found myself also worried for Kreacher though I knew he'd return. While I was caught up in the Kreacher/Regulus/locket affair, you had to go rip my heart out with the Phillips. Regulus was in such a difficult place with his own need to stay alive versus the pull to protect the woman he had come to know as an extra mother-figure. Part of me broke when Anne recognized him - I think part of regulus broke too. I wasn't surprised that Voldemort saw Regulus' emotions at the murder. I feel as if he would have been dead regardless of his quest for the locket. He's right about Voldemort being a bit foolish to break about his Horcrux as his followers like and have likely studied dark magic.

I almost had to cover my eyes as Regulus went to the cave with Kreacher, knowoing the awful fate that awaited him. I started crying as he thought of Summer and her strength. I was for real crying when Summer was more real to him. It reminded me of how Harry felt about the resurection stone pulling his parents, Sirius, and Remus back to him. It was like Summer was there to collect him. I'm glad the eternal summer line was the last because I could not have read on wtih the crying that was happening then (and now). I'm only somewhat sure that this is coherant (or the words I meant to type :P).

Thank you so much for writing this heartbreaking piece!


Author's Response: that first part was definitely inspired by a lot of my own feelings of grief in that it's not so much what happened, but what it means, that's really affecting.

wow thank you, I'm so glad you connected that much with the story and were worried for Kreacher even though you knew what was going on. And yeah, as horrible as that part is with the Phillips, there needed to be something that completely tipped Regulus over the edge with no return, and that was that. You know, I think Regulus probably saw that as well (that he would have been dead regardless) and that was part of why he went through with his locket plan. He knew he was going to die for that, so he probably saw that he didn't have long anyway. Given all Dumbledore says about Voldemort's belief that he stood out, it seemed like something Voldemort would do to brag about Horcruxes and think no one would pick up on it. Dur.

Aw wow, I'm so touched about your reaction to the last part, and I love that you associated it with Harry seeing the Resurrection Stone, and how Summer was there to collect him - that's such a lovely way to see it. *hands box of tissues*

I'm sorry about the sheer depressingness of this :[ But thank you so much. Your reviews are the best. ♥

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Review #11, by toomanycurls syzygy

23rd January 2015:
I SECRETLY READ AHEAD LAST NIGHT AND I'M SO MAD AT YOU! I *knew* this would be a heartbreaking story and and I still read it. :( :( :(

Summer's mellowness and despondancy while telling Regulus about having cancer is understandable. I mean, I'd be in tears. it's just such a difference in her from norma.l which, again, is expected. IT'S JUST SAD AND SHE HASN'T EVEN GOTTEN REALLY SICK FROM IT YET AND you took away her happiness. :( Regulus' reaction was kind of perfect. At least he realized how much she's been there for him (and I hope he's there for her now).

Again with the Sirius contrasts. Are you looking to poke every feel in this story? I loved their chat about Chirstmas. I mean, Regulus is treated like a prince (and I'm not surprised). Summer's Christmas sounds pretty fun as well - much more jovial though.

I guess if Voldemort is good for one thing, it's giving Regulus' parents an excuse for sneaking out. gah. more with the sirius. I feel like he's almost a character in this story if not just because of how much Regulus misses him.

His visit was wonderful. I'm crushed that she won't be going back to school this year and I can only imagine how hard that will be on Regulus. and and and I FEEL LIKE SOMETHING BAD IS GOING TO HAPPEN AND I'LL HAVE TO GLARE AT YOU MORE.

ALKFJALSKFJ WITH THE MEL REFERENCE AND STOP. My feels are going nuts. I'm also not surprised his mom chekced up on the claim to have plans for Voldemort.

For some reason, even though nothing overtly sad happens while he's back at school, this section made me incredibly sad. too sad even for caps. the whole note about Anne being like a mother but I can tell that she's nothing like his mother - it's just too much for me on a friday. don't let her health go downhill even more. i can't handle it.

Jasper doesn't seem as horrible here. I mean, he doesn't really support their friendship but he's not a jerk about it either.

The books on immortality and having him research what a horcrux is for her is making me cry. THERE ARE TEARS. darn it. I knew she knew and love that she's still there for him and IT CANT' BE THE END OF SUMMER. my husband is confused now about the tears. fyi.

oh I don't know if I can emotionally handle the last chapter.


Author's Response: aw! I'm touched that you decided to continue reading despite knowing that this would be a feels-destroying fic. *hugs*

this is where I think the other side of her characteristic acceptance shows - she just despondently accepts the fact that she's ill while it's hard for Regulus to wrap his head around the idea. But yeah, it was a huge wake up call for Regulus.

I love what you said about Sirius in this story - how although he never actually appears, he's basically a character in the story because Regulus misses him so much. I hadn't thought of it that way. Aw :'(

i'm glad you liked the christmas scene at the hospital. That scene - well really this whole chapter - similarly to how you wrote dull ache, this chapter is more personal experience than it is fiction. (well, except for you know, Death Eaters and Voldemort and stuff.)

as for your predictions... um, I'm just going to put on sunglasses because they reduce glare. (Ahaha, get it? :P)

I'm glad you appreciated (I think? there are many ways to interpret keyboard smash but I'm gonna take it as a good thing) that sort-of cameo from Melanie and I'm sorry it attacked the feels. Haha yeah, Mrs Black isn't really a trusting type is she

That's definitely what I was trying to show with Jasper - he's still not a particularly understanding person, and still very under the influence of the blood status obsession, but he cares about his friends and doesn't want them to get hurt. He's trying! :p

I'm sorry about the tears. But at the same time I'm really glad this touched you and made you connect with the story - it means a lot to know that people are affected by your writing (as i'm sure you understand as a writer yourself, who has written many things that crushed my feels as well.) so... *hands tissue*

Thank you so much for your review ♥

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Review #12, by toomanycurls equinox

23rd January 2015:

(typing out the words seemed like too much work)

Here I am wrapped up in how Regulus is finally coming out of his shell and you do this to me?!?!? ughhghgh. why!?! I'll go back to the start though.

I love how you set Regulus up as the good boy (in pureblood terms) who really isn't into the bigotry stuff but it's what is expected of him. He's not a sinner or a saint, just a guy going through the motions. This really makes me sympathize with Regulus as well as other people who are raised in homes where bigotry is the norm. It's almost as if he doesn't know better. Also, I love that he sees Sirius as being happier as the rebel despite not being part of the family anymore.

His complaint that Summer is too happy just slays me. Partially because it's something i might say about an overly cheery person but it's also such a minor thing to someone who can't get over her blood status long enough to work past that. I love Summer's unrelenting cheer and I love even more that she's aware of Regulus' negative thoughts/demeanor but still pushes forward with a positive attitude.

It's so sad that regulus had doubts so soon with the death eaters. I like how you showed his hesitance at knowing what Rosier was doing - you didn't make him some noble dude who realized the humanity of what they're doing, it was a kind of selfish take on not wanting to do that himself. At their first sunset together, Summer is just remarkably kind. But, again, she's not oblivious. And, I loved his annoyance at Sirius using his name as a pun. xoxo

When the Slytherins started to ask Regulus about going out in the evenings I thought their friendship would be over (his and Summer's). I was just amazed at how accepting she is of him at this point. When they found the room of requirement, it felt just as much of a safehaven for them as it did for other students in the books. Oh how I wish Regulus could be free everywhere. :( And then when he broke down about not wanting to be in that life anymore and being trapped :'( :'( why must you hurt me so?

alright, the part i'm mad about. what the heck with the roller coaster about maybe she's dead and then with the 'we need to talk' business??! so many glares going your way

awesome chapter!!


Author's Response: Hi Rose!

I'm glad you liked the setup of Regulus. He's definitely not evil, but he's not really good either - he's just a confused teenager who doesn't want to be rejected. As you said, going through the motions. I'm really glad this made you sympathise with him - I think he really doesn't know better. And yes, he can see that Sirius is happy, despite that it goes against what he's been taught. It's confusing. Poor Reg.

Hahaha, yeah I would probably say that about an overly happy person as well! :p Regulus isn't a cheerful type but yeah I'd imagine that part of it is because he doesn't get why Mudbloods should be happy and he's not. I'm really glad you like Summer!

You've really nailed that thought about his doubts of the Death Eaters- exactly, it was a selfish thing, and not a case of him changing his mind about the whole cause. Summer gives off this happy-go-lucky vibe but as you've pointed out, she is quite perceptive. Haha, I love Sirius puns. But I imagine Regulus would get tired of them. :p

Summer is very accepting in a lot of ways, which marks the huge difference between her and Regulus' other friends. I just loved the idea of the Room of Requirement as a safe place where all their problems don't exist. But it only makes it harder once they leave the room :( Ah, I probably should have warned you, this story only hurts more feels as it progresses :S

Thank you so much for your review!!

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Review #13, by AdinaPuff solstice

20th January 2015:
Review swap!

I thought this was the perfect opportunity to finish this. And it's so sad, but so perfect!

Regulus grieving over his loss of Summer was perfect. He reflected over everything she was for herself and others around her, and then finally for him. She was his best friend and he loved her, and it was just written perfect. Well done with the grieving.

And then poor Mrs. Phillips. I was praying she wouldn't recognize him, but then she did! Dying knowing that her daughter's friend was there and doing nothing... so sad. I know Reg was sad too because he cried. And then The Dark Lord calling him weak. Well, he certainly was not weak.

I've always thought what made Reg do what he did. I've always been convinced it was for Sirius. I feel like it is. But this is another reason that was beautiful. And poor Kreacher having to sit through it and help him even though he knew it was going to kill Reg. So sad. But it was heroic and perfect. He did it for Summer and Mrs. Phillips and even a little for Kreacher too.

Great short story here! I loved it so, so much. It was so touching in every aspect.


Author's Response: Hi! I'm so glad you came back to finish this, and that you liked it!

That was quite an emotional part to write, as he kind of shuts down after Summer's death. But yeah he has to come to terms with how important she was to him, how much she changed him, and how much he's lost.

After all that had happened already and him still being afraid to show his true colours, it needed to be something truly heartbreaking that pushed him over the edge, and yeah, that must have been almost worse for her. :( You're right, Reg was definitely not weak. It takes a lot of strength to go through what he did.

In a way, I think it was for Sirius too - as I saw it, he did it for everyone who had ever been hurt by the war, as it was a pretty big sacrifice he was making. It was really horrible for Kreacher, yeah - to watch probably his favourite person in the world die. :'(

I'm so glad you liked this story despite it being like a huge glomp of sad feels. It means a lot to me that you found it touching. Thanks so much for the swap!!

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Review #14, by AdinaPuff syzygy

16th January 2015:
Hi, here for our swap!

So I definitely remember reading the first chapter of this. I loved, loved, loved it! But I do believe only the first chapter was posted at the time. This is a wonderful story.

You never really see as many friendship stories as you do romance. I, for one, am a sucker for romance, so I rarely write any friendships. But this? It's perfect. I'm in love with the whole idea of it. Regulus with a muggleborn girl, who just so happens to be sick with cancer. It's so sad--cancer is terrible. Although he should be careful--I'd hate to see anything happen to her because Reg slipped up, or Jasper let the word out that Regulus was seeing a muggleborn. Even if it's just as a friend, it's just as dangerous.

Regulus is one of my absolute favorites, so it's lovely to read stories circling around him and through his point of view. Well done!

Thanks for the swap! I'll be reading the next chapter soon. I loved this so much! Such a sweet story. I'm sure I'll cry at the end. Especially with those last words '...; the end of Summer.'.

-Leigh :)

Author's Response: Hi! :)

Aw, thank you - that is so wonderful to hear! I'm so glad you like this story.

That's so true, and a huge part of the reason I wrote the story in the first place. There really aren't enough stories about friendship out there! I'm really glad you like the premise as well, with Regulus' friendship with a Muggle-born girl. He definitely has a lot to be careful about at this point :-/

I really like Regulus too, I think he's such a wonderful, tragic character and is overlooked by almost everyone in the books. I'm so glad you like his POV here.

yeah the end of this chapter doesn't exactly bode well :S Thank you so much for the swap and for your lovely review!!

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Review #15, by AlexFan solstice

13th January 2015:
I get the sense that Regulus is a little bit disgusted with himself and how easily it was for him to go back to being the person that he was before and shutting off his feelings. He mustíve felt that around Summer he had changed into a new person, and Regulus did change, but he almost seems to think that without Summer there, heís still the same old prejudiced person that he was before who chose to feel nothing. I canít imagine how lonely it mustíve been for Regulus at this point in his life to have no one to turn to, although Iím sure Sirius wouldíve forgiven had he found out what his little brother was going through.

You can definitely see why Kreacher liked Regulus the most out of everyone, Regulus gave Kreacher the care and attention that no one else in Regulusís family gave. And as tough as Kreacher may try to be, and as much as he may insist that it is his job to serve the Blacks, he still wants someone to treat him like an actual being instead of dirt. Can you imagine how much Regulusís kindness mustíve impacted him?

The more I keep thinking about Regulus the sadder Iím getting because I can just picture the amount of self-loathing that he went through thinking that he was not enough and then having the Dark Lord tell him that he was weak. And itís funny that the Dark Lord should describe Regulus as being weak like a girl considering his right hand lieutenant is Bellatrix Lestrange, a girl.

It almost seems as if Regulus has completely gotten over Summer and her family dying but then you bring it back when I least expect it and I realise that Regulus hasnít forgotten at all but the only way for him to deal with the pain and loss that he witnessed is by shutting all of his emotions down and bottling it up instead of letting it out because heís never known how to do anything else in his life. This was so sad but so well written and I really enjoyed this short story!

Author's Response: You're definitely right, Regulus isn't in a good place, and I like what you pointed out about him worrying if he's become the same prejudiced, unchanged person he was before. I could absolutely see that as being a factor in why he's so upset. Ahh and yeah Sirius would probably have forgiven him if they weren't too stubborn to talk to each other. Writing this story made me so frustrated with both of them because it all COULD have turned out so much better!

Given how attached Kreacher was to 'Master Regulus' in the books, it seemed like Regulus had to have been kind to him otherwise why would Kreacher be so loyal. Yeah, Kreacher may not have been the nicest later on, but he did have feelings.

I love that you pointed that out about Voldemort's insult that Regulus is like 'a weak little girl', because of course Bellatrix is certainly not weak. But I wouldn't put it past Voldemort to make a sexist comment even when his strongest supporter is a female. Boo, Voldemort.

You've definitely got Regulus summed up pretty well in that last paragraph, and I'm so glad that you understood him that well, means I did that effectively so that's really great to hear.

Thank you, it really means a lot to hear that you liked this story and thought it was well written. Thanks so much for your review!! ♥

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Review #16, by bethanex equinox

10th January 2015:
I've always been a fan of Regulus - I wish there was more out there about him. I'm so glad you wrote this from his POV, it really gives insight to his transformation while he was still in Hogwarts. Still, I wish there was a little more of this, a little more description of the depth of his feelings. I really like how you characterized Summer, she's one my favorite OC's. I also love the idea that Regulus' friendship with this girl and her personality can give him the strength to think for himself.

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for your review! Regulus quickly became one of my favourite characters when I wrote this and I'm so glad to hear you like him in this. At this point of the story he is kind of drifting and not really attached to either side, hence the possible lack of depth of his feelings. I'd be interested to know what you think of him as the story goes on, if you read the rest (because he does change a lot). I'm really glad to hear that you like Summer and her friendship with Regulus, as well!

Thanks so much for your review! :)

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Review #17, by crestwood solstice

7th January 2015:
Hi Kristin! I had to return to this story because I am basically obsessed with it in every way.

This is so incredibly sad. The fact that Summer died definitely isn't going to do wonders for his already quite unstable mental state. I really feel for him when he says that he's lost a part of himself. I am just enamored with the way you've written his reaction to all of this. This really makes me wonder what he might have done if she was still alive. I'm thinking he may have run away with her and possibly gone into hiding. I think he was heading in a direction in which he would not have wanted to be a Death Eater. Of course, we know he eventually gives up his life to harm Voldemort's cause, but we're not there yet.

The scene in which Sirius and Regulus make eye contact in the graveyard is heartbreaking. I mean, everything about this chapter has been so far, really. People speak a lot about the tragedy of Sirius and Snape's lives, but this story has made me realize that Regulus' life was totally not all roses and that his story was possibly more dismal than anyone's.

I love that you addressed how Kreacher had no idea that Regulus had internally changed sides. It's like you're just writing down all of my super specific headcanon and more into one story.

Can't think of any more synonyms for sad to describe Regulus still sending letters back and forth with Summer's parents. Her characters gives an already awesome character just that much more depth. Even after she's dead, her mark on this story is unmistakable. I am constantly made speechless by all of this. It's pretty much perfect in every way.

The imagery of time as running through mud!!! How do you do this??

I love that Reg gave Kreacher that order to return back home out of genuine distrust because he totally had a reason to feel that way!

I cannot believe they killed Summer's parents. I feel like I won't ever get over this. I didnít see this coming at all and I don't think I have actual words for this so I'll just say--wow.

The idea of the world being that much more vibrant as he went to go find Kreacher is a great one because it gives us a bit of his viewpoint as he willingly walks into death.

The end was fittingly desolate and just beautifully worded. You've really done Regulus justice. This is by far the best depiction of him that I've ever read and that I'm ever likely to read. It was a pleasure to read this story, really. You are really so incredibly talented. You should be proud of this. Thank you for the swap!

Author's Response: JOEY ♥ This review almost made me cry (in a good way though), it was so kind and just ajsdlkfasd?!?!?!?! (I will try to respond coherently!)

I'm so glad you liked Regulus' reaction and the way he dealt with his grief/problems. Aah, your idea that he might have run away with Summer and tried to get out if she had survived - yes. I hadn't even thought about that as I knew before writing this that she was going to die, but if she had survived... I love that. I have this great image now of them running away and then Regulus making amends with Sirius and all these wonderful things that could have been. And I'm really sad now because that didn't happen. Waah!

I'm glad to hear you were touched by that scene with Sirius and Regulus. You're so right though, I feel like from the books we see Sirius' and Snape's side of things and it's really sad, but we only ever get other people's opinions on Regulus, people who didn't really understand what he went through. ahh! I love that you felt like I was writing down your specific headcanon haha, that's so cool!

Gah, thank you! I really liked the addition Summer's Muggle parents made to the story and as they were Regulus' only remaining link to her, I could see them still corresponding. I'm so glad you liked the depth it provided and as for the rest - I am constantly made speechless by your reviews!

I'm glad you like the reasoning behind Reg's order for Kreacher to return home. Ah, about Summer's parents, I really did feel terrible as basically every main character dies except for Kreacher, but it had to happen. :(

I'm glad you liked that bit about the world being more vibrant. That was the impression I got after re-reading that chapter of Kreacher's story in Deathly Hallows, and translating Kreacher's confusion into Regulus' last view of all these things was a really interesting writing process.

Thank you, I really appreciate you saying the end was beautifully worded and that the desolation fit. Aaa, I really don't know what to say other than thank you SO much and I'm incredibly flattered that you think so highly of my depiction of Regulus and of this story as a whole. That means so much to me, thanks!

I don't know how to thank you enough for this incredible review, it really did make my day. Seriously, thank you so much.

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Review #18, by AlexFan syzygy

29th December 2014:
First off, sorry for taking so long with this review but it has arrived finally!

You said that you were worried about lack of description, and for me, itís personally not an issue. I like the little details that you include throughout the story of Siriusís life and what his family is like around him, I think thereís enough to get to know Regulus even more than before and to really get an idea of what his home life is like, but not enough so that I end up getting bored and just start skimming. In terms of setting description, you could add in more description if you really wanted to give a vivid picture of Hogwarts but I personally donít feel this part to be all that important since the characters drive the story forward.

I loved the interaction between Regulus and Summerís parents. This entire experience for Regulus is just showing that everything heís been told about muggles was false and that theyíre ordinary people just like him, except they canít do magic. It sounds like heís honestly surprised to find how utterly normal Summerís parents are, almost as if he expected them to be these savage creatures.

I seriously just wish that Regulus would get fed up with his friends, knock them in the face and then stalk out of the Slytherin common room to get a cookie or something for his good work. My God, his friends are worse than his family when it comes to sticking their nose into Regulusís business.

I really loved that last line at the end of the chapter, itís my favourite one, because not only is Regulus talking about the seasons, but itís foreshadowing and I just really really love it because of how well it fits into the story and Iím just sitting here like, ďhe he, clever.Ē

Author's Response: I understand as this is a busy time of year so no worries!

That's great to hear that the description was sufficient and that you liked the details, and that you felt it helped you get to know Regulus better in this chapter. In this story I did try to focus on little specifics rather than broader description so that's good to hear.

Aw, thank you! It probably was a surprise for him to find out how normal they are after everything else he's been taught growing up. I'm thrilled you liked that as it was a pretty important moment for him.

Gah, right? They are one of the only reasons holding him back at this point from freeing himself - but although they are nosy and closed-minded, I was hoping to show that they do really care about Regulus, in their way.

Thanks so much about that last line, I really liked that one as well and it's so lovely to hear that it's well received. I'm glad you appreciated the multiple meanings in it as well ;)

Thanks so much for your review, Grace!

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Review #19, by kenpo solstice

27th December 2014:

I'm so sorry and I'm so disappointed with myself! I'm so sorry. I feel so guilty!

Okay, well this last chapter deserves a review! It deserves all the reviews! This chapter, and this entire story, was just gorgeous. GORGEOUS. Also horrible and sad and other things, but mostly it was a sickening gorgeous. If that makes sense.

The way that you developed Regulus' character, particularly in that last chapter... really, the only way that I can think to describe it is just gorgeous.

By far, my favorite part was the ending. Your interpretation of the potion, and of what it makes you feel... ahhh! It gave me so many feelings, it made my stomach twist up a little. I loved how he wasn't sure who was talking, and his was just totally not at all connected to reality anymore. Really, just gorgeous.

The fact that he wrote to Summer's mother was touching, and it was another great touch for Regulus' chararacterisation.

This story was totally depressing, but I'm one of those people that loves depressing things, so this was totally my type of chapter, and my type of story!!

Oh ohohoh another thing I liked was that Regulus did seem to care for Kreacher. He's not your average Pureblood, and there were so many times that you showed that so gracefully.

Thanks so much for the swap, and I'm sorry it took me so long to get aorund to this!!


Author's Response: No worries! That's kind of how I felt upon discovering a new chapter of One Blaze of Glory, so we're even! :p

Gah, thank you so much, I'm so glad to hear that you thought this chapter was gorgeous, despite how horrible it is in terms of what's happening. I'm glad you liked his character development in this chapter as well.

ah, thank you so much! Maybe it sounds morbid of me to say this but I'm so happy to hear that you had all the feelings and that you liked the ending part with the potion when he's not sure what is real and what's not. That was such an important part of the story as I felt like everything had been leading up to it in a way so it is great to hear that it was powerful.

This story provided a neat opportunity to write Kreacher and Regulus in a way that didn't conform to the stereotypes of either - given how attached Kreacher was to 'Master Regulus', it seemed only natural to me that Regulus was kind and cared for him. So thank you, I'm really glad you liked that.

Yeah it was totally depressing, so I'm glad you enjoy totally depressing stories! :P Thank you so much for your review! ♥

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Review #20, by crestwood syzygy

24th December 2014:
Hi Kristin! Finally getting around to clearing out my Review Thread. I've left in limbo for far too long. Naturally, I choose to start with your story because I remember loving the first chapter and wanted to see what you had in store for the rest of it.

I was not expecting this twist in the story at all. Cancer is not something I expected to happen, although your explanation of it happening to Muggleborns makes a lot of sense. I have written one story about a Wizarding equivalent of cancer and, for that matter, read enough books featuring it to know that this is going to be very, very sad from here on out. This adds a whole new sort of gravity to this story. It's not just about Death Eaters anymore, it's definitely rooted in the real world with a very real problem and that'll only make this better.

And it's a brain tumor. That is truly terrifying to have happen to you.

Somehow them having to make sure no one sees them together is much sadder given the circumstances. This is adding another layer of tragedy to this already doomed-to-be-devastating story. (by virtue of Regulus as protagonist)

He seems to be maturing, realizing that he'd been selfish and only thought about his own problems. The fact that he finds himself truly concerned for her is a very good sign. He's clearly not just using her any longer.

The image of Regulus and Sirius acting like normal brothers over the holidays is wonderful. I really wish things could have been different somehow. They would have gotten along in any other situation. Everything about this is making me kind of sad.

The fact that he asked Summer about her family and how they celebrate Christmas is important. He isn't quite so adamant to make everything about himself anymore.

He lied about a task at the request of Voldemort for Summer!! That is dedication to a person. He has to realize how much she means to him now, you don't do that for just anyone.

The scene in which he realizes that shaking a Muggle's hand is no different than a Wizards was powerful on so many levels. What an amazing way to articulate that!

Yes, Sirius would love Summer!! And it's hilarious how Regulus is just totally like--"Yeah, well maybe Bella doesn't know everything ugh."

I am so happy that he's sending letters to Summer and even communicating with her mother. The contrast between Summer and Anne's letters is really striking. This is so incredibly upsetting, but in a good way. You've written such an emotional roller-coaster of a chapter, I am so impressed.

For all of his faults, Jasper is a really good friend for continuing to cover for Regulus despite hating Muggles and not understanding his friendship with Summer. I really like his character, even if he is on the wrong side of the war.

I'm so happy to see Regulus starting to think better of the whole Death Eater thing. He's in way too deep already, but he really would never have fit in there. He has much too good of a heart to ever be fine needlessly slaughtering people as they do.

I am so amazed at him searching for a way to keep Summer alive. And I love this line: 'She couldn't die; she was too good.

You tied this to canon so perfectly!! He found the Deathly Hallows and Horcruxes! The latter explaining how he figured out what Voldemort was up to with the locket! I am in awe of this because it fits so perfectly into the established events and everything is just right. Love every part of it.

Of course she knew he was a Death Eater. She was far too perceptive not to.

Also, how beautiful was the way you chose to write in her death?! 'In the air was the beginning of autumn; the end of Summer.' I am bowing down to you, this was perfect from start to finish. One of the best chapters of fan fiction I have ever read. What a mind-blowing read. Wow. Thank you so much for requesting this because I might not have remembered to continue otherwise and that would have been such a shame.

Author's Response: This was such a wonderful review and I kept going back to re-read it rather than respond, so I'm sorry I've taken a while for that :p Seriously though, it was so kind and you are the best.

Regulus was pretty wrapped up in his own problems by this point (which, granted, are pretty difficult problems) and he needed to step back from what's happening in his own life, so it ended up being ultimately a very real-world, scary thing. I'm really glad you appreciated that aspect even though you weren't expecting it. That section on Christmas was by far the most difficult part of the story for me to write, because that part has a personal connection for me, but ultimately I think it added some stark reality that was essential for this type of story. Anyway, I'm glad to hear that you thought it added to the story.

I know, after all that they STILL can't be seen together, just when they need each other the most. :(

I feel like Regulus and Sirius would have gotten along so well in different circumstances and it makes me so sad that they never reconciled. And I love the idea that they were close when they were younger, just being silly, normal brothers.

This is definitely the point when Regulus starts to realise what it means to be a good friend, and to be, in other words, what Summer has been for him thus far, and he really starts to focus on her. He's changing! I'm glad it came across as well, that he wasn't using her and that he genuinely does care. Enough to lie about a task with Voldemort! :D

Ah, thank you so much - I'm really glad you liked that bit about shaking hands. It was a big moment for Regulus!

I really liked the idea of Regulus becoming friends with an actual Muggle, and I think his corresponding with Anne showed that Summer's perennial 'bright-side' view did have its drawbacks. It means a lot to me that you thought this chapter was affecting and emotional, thank you!

It kind of surprised me how much I ended up liking Jasper by the end of this. But 'good vs bad' is such a grey area that I really wanted to explore with him and I'm so glad to hear that it was effective and that you like him as a character.

Thank you - I'm so glad you like the link to canon! I figured he had to have at least a bit of prior knowledge about Horcruxes in order to figure Voldemort's secret out, and then it ended up that he discovered it while trying to save a Mudblood - Voldemort would be thrilled at the irony, I'm sure :p

I think that's one of my favourite lines from the whole story and I'm so glad you liked that as well. Gah, thank you so much for saying it was beautiful ♡ And wow ahh I just really have no coherent words to reply to the rest of this review, just... I'm so flattered that you thought so highly of it! Aah! Thank you so much for such an incredible review ♥

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Review #21, by AlexFan equinox

17th December 2014:
I can definitely see the problem that Regulus was having, and I can definitely relate to him as well. He wants to please everyone, all of his family has placed such high expectations on him and heís conflicted about what he wants to do because he wants to make everyone happy, but no matter what Regulus does, someone is going to end up unhappy with him. I mean, obviously he should do whatever makes him happy, but thatís a lot easier said than done, especially when youíre in his situation.

I find it kind of funny actually how completely grumpy Regulus is about everything. I mean, he hates it when people are too happy (and is it weird that I know what he means by that). He claims to be so annoyed by this girl yet he notices her whenever she greets other people. That one encounter with her and itís already beginning to have an effect on him.

Summer seems like such a nice person, sheís one of those people that makes friends really easily and is well-liked by everyone, yet you have no idea how she manages to do it so easily.

ďI never claimed I was a saint.Ē That line for some reason just really stood out to me. I think it was because it just really reminded me that Regulus is trying so hard to convince himself of the things that his parents have instilled in him and to behave like a proper pureblood, but itís just making him unhappy and itís obvious because heís so inclined to hang out with Summer. Someone that was devoted to Voldemort would never do that.

I honestly really love your Regulus. I loved hearing him talk about his favourite things about winter, it just really showed how young he was no matter how tough and mature he tried to act about everything. I mean, he needs to ease up on the Mudblood there but in general he seems like a kid who doesnít know what heís gotten himself into (which is pretty much what happened in canon).

And I love Summer because sheís such a genuinely nice and caring person. Sheís always there for her friends and she was even willing to listen and become friends with this boy that made it more than obvious that he didnít want to be around her, not a lot of people would do that. She is the very opposite of Regulus, and somehow, the two of them work.

I just really love this and Iím beginning to wonder why I havenít read this before now.

Author's Response: Grace, thank you for such a lovely review! Gaa!

I'm really glad that Regulus is relatable in his situation there. He is really put in a tough place between the two sides of his family and his friends and his house and it's good to hear that his indecision seems to fit.

Haha, yeah I don't like it when people are overly happy either, I'm glad you can relate too :p I think Summer's outlook on life is just so alien to him that he can't help but notice. She does have a huge effect on him even when he doesn't notice.

Ah, I'm so glad you liked that line, and I really like your interpretation of it. He is definitely unhappy where he is, and doesn't know where he belongs, and it's possible he's just convincing himself that even though he's hanging out with Summer that he still doesn't like her. You made some great points there!

Thank you, I am so glad you like my portrayal of Regulus, and especially the kind of innocent side of him that likes Christmas and snow. You're right - he's really just a kid who's had to grow up too fast.

So glad you like Summer as well! Regulus needed some sort of opposite influence than he had from the rest of his life and it's really wonderful to hear that you like her and that despite all the reasons she shouldn't, she works as a good friend for Reg.

Thank you so much for your kind review! I really appreciate it ♥

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Review #22, by Red_headed_juliet syzygy

15th December 2014:
Oh man. Poor Reg. I'm going to love this story. I'm such a sucker for tragedy.

Ok, well! I enjoy the introspection and how much of Reg's thoughts we're getting in this chapter. I really feel the internal battle going on now, his struggle with morality in general.

Honestly, the only bit of CC I have is that I would like more. Lol. When you say that Sirius would like Summer, why? What about her did Reg think Sirius would like? What does Anne look like? What about her dad?

I think the more details you put in, the more immersive it will be. With this being in first person, it can start to sound a bit narrative, but the more you describe, the less it will seem like that.

The sinking feeling in my stomach when he found the thing about Horcruxes was a good thing. You subtly reminded us of how this is bound to end, and the foreknowledge plus anticipation just makes this little piece a nail biter.

I'm so happy that I'm so sad about this! Haha. Thank you so much for the swap! Until next time!

Author's Response: He has definitely changed a lot since the previous chapter, for sure! So much internal angst haha yeah. It's a huge struggle for anyone to go through.

Ah, you love descriptions too - an author after my own heart, really :D Since it's only a three part story though, it gave me limited space to describe everything. I suppose I left out some about the descriptions of Summer's parents in order to include other things. (They are briefly described in the third chapter, I believe.) I hope it didn't seem too much like telling rather than showing! :S

I'm glad you liked that part about him finding the horcruxes... although it does remind you about the inevitable sad ending, it's great to hear that it was suspenseful and keeps up anticipation!

Thanks for the swap! :)

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Review #23, by tangledconstellations solstice

4th December 2014:
Gah! My heart hurts!

Compared to the last chapter, I feel like the angst that welcomes you to this chapter is well-needed. Poor, poor Regulus :( I think its really important that you've shown him to be both accepting and also really really angry that Summer has died. Grief is such a complex thing, but just as the last chapter was a catalyst, this chapter is definitely the reaction that I wanted to see!

When I initially started reading this, the story that you set up in the first chapter feels so, so different to the one concluding right now before me - in the best possible way! It's like you've shown this important contrast between normal school life, making new friends, etc etc with a topic so much bigger than just Hogwarts and just the wizarding community. First of all, I had no inkling at all in the first chapter that Summer was unwell, but the way it panned out was so effective. This is super angsty but I love it so much. I love it because it is just such a good example of why you should keep your mind open when reading fics. I wasn't expecting any of this to happen. Come to think of it, I don't really know what I expected to happen, but I love the way this HAS happened. Gah! I am totally rambling. But this is such an awesome three-act story and've done such a good job with this fic!

Ultimately I think it's great the way you tied this story in with canon events. You gave Regulus a true motive - something I'd kind of been searching for when reading the books. I can totally understand why he did the things he did, and the reason why is such a pure one, too. Everything really came to a head in this final chapter and Regulus felt different to how he did in the first couple. He's taking more responsibility and he's changed because of Summer and because of the impact her death had on him. It's really, really effective.

Finishing the chapter the way you did really works because it puts emphasis on why we all know Regulus, but it twists his actions so that we can understand them more. I feel like I've been searching for a Regulus fic all my life that really grips me and leaves me feeling like he's more real than he is in the books (does that make sense?), and I think I've found the one!

I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this story, and I know I'll probably be back in a month or so to reread :) EEP! Loved it.

Laura x

Author's Response: This review literally made my week. I can't get over it. I want to print it out and hang it on my wall. a;skdjc;jawi THANK YOU ♥♥

Yeah, this is where the angst piles on and only goes from bad to worse. :( Especially since he feels all this anger and guilt and listlessness but he STILL can't show it.

I'm glad this chapter feels so different to the ones preceding it - I was definitely writing a different style in this one because this is when he really makes his change personally. I'm so thrilled to hear that the contrast and the big topics stood out to you, and that it wasn't predictable! Gah, thank you so much!

There was so much to explore that was left out of Regulus' small part in canon, so this story was sort of my way of fleshing out his background. I'm so glad you thought this provided the motive that wasn't evident when reading the books! It really is so wonderful to hear that it was all effective. :)

Aah, those last two paragraphs I just don't know how to properly respond other than saying THANK YOU!! I'm so honoured! So glad you enjoyed this story - I loved your thoughtful reviews!

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Review #24, by tangledconstellations syzygy

4th December 2014:
Hey again, love! Back with your second review :)

I thought this chapter was really special, because here Regulus is starting to understand that things exist that are a lot bigger than him in his self-centered world! It feels very coming-of-age-y, because he's growing up, in a way. He's starting to realise that he cares about Summer, not because she makes him feel better about himself, but because she is a good person. I love that this chapter is the middle one, the crux of the story, holding it all together. I guess essentially Summer telling Regulus that she is so very unwell is the catalyst for him, to consider who he is and what he should stand for.

At the same time, it was good that you didn't rush into Regulus suddenly being this totally awesome nice guy. He's still reluctant to really openly reveal that he's friends with Summer. In a way, this really makes me sad because she's been such a support for him! But at the same time, it's understandable - and one of the merits of this piece. You haven't broken out of Regulus' character at all, and that's really important, I think. Him talking to Jasper was a really good moment in this chapter. It's so easy to write every Slytherin or every Death Eater off as a terrible, awful person with no human emotion, ever. But of course, that's dumb! :P I think Jasper's character is really interesting. Even though he is still prejudiced he's patient and a good friend, too. I'm finding myself wanting to read a one shot from Jasper's point of view based on this situation... :P hehehe

The last four paragraphs for me were really wonderful. You showed the passing of time really well, something I find really difficult to do without it sounding a bit weird. Reading how you did it was definitely inspiring because it felt really effortless, kind of suggesting that to Regulus that time didn't really matter. The way you finished this chapter, too, was really nice. It was gentle and sad and made me really feel for everyone in such an awful situation, but you didn't over do it at all.

This chapter was really lovely, and ties in so beautifully with the first.

Laura x

Author's Response: Hi again, Laura! ♥

That is exactly what I had in mind for this chapter - it's where he finally begins to open his eyes and see more than just himself. The point when Summer tells Regulus her secret really makes Regulus think about what is important to him. Very much a catalyst.

I'm glad you appreciated Regulus' continued reluctance to openly align with anything though - even if he was figuring out where he stood, it's harder to wear that face publicly, so outwardly he's the same as he was. I'm thrilled to hear that he was in character throughout! Ah yes and Jasper... thank you! Haha, yeah I like to think the Slytherins are more complicated than that, and it would be unrealistic for them to just be 100% evil and devoid of feeling. I love moral grey areas and Jasper is definitely a prime example of that.

Thank you, I'm really happy that you liked those last paragraphs with the changing of the seasons. I love what you said about it, that's really beautiful and I'm flattered!

Thanks so much for yet another amazing review!!

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Review #25, by tangledconstellations equinox

2nd December 2014:
Hey there! :)

I'm so sorry for the delay in reviewing! I read this a week or so ago but didn't have time to review - but I'm so glad I've found time now!

I think the whole tone throughout is really really brilliant. I really really felt as though I was on the same level as Regulus throughout - something that's pretty hard to achieve because he's such a mysterious character throughout the series. I love your take on him, because there are so many unanswered questions about his motives that we can only speculate on and you've given a really honest and interesting take on his story. I think you've hit the nail on the head with your portrayal - he was both likable and aggravatingly stuck up at the same time! :P

This is an absolutely perfect opening chapter. It's so refreshing to read a fic where the two main characters aren't going to just fall head over heels in love. You've set up a strong basis on their actual friendship and on them ultimately being on the same wavelength, which again makes the reader question how much they know about Regulus, thus giving you lots of lovely scope! You've introduced us to his world, to his closest friends and also to a conflict that is going to play out in the next couple of chapters. In technical terms, everything is done spot on! The gradual warming to Summer, too, is done at such a pace that you've gently swept the reader along with Regulus and his changing attitudes. He doesn't once feel out of character - except that he is quite spontaneous in wanting to see the view with her again - but it totally works because she has this positive hold on him, which again links to their friendship and how great they work together.

I love your writing style so much! (sorry for abusing the exclamation mark - I'm just really trying to get my point across :P ) I'm so envious how you manage to weave the quite serious issue of finding your identity with that of humour - it kinda kept in my mind that they are teenagers and mainly that Summer is so bright and positive - she keeps the tone balanced. The whole chapter feels so balanced and perfectly timed. It kind of surprised me when I reached the end. You have this great mix of positive moments then a conflict, and then ordinary show it in such a natural way.

As for Regulus himself...I love that you end the chapter with him lying to his Slytherin friends. It's almost as though he's made his choice in who he wants to be - he just hasn't worked it out yet. And a cliff hanger too! Having Summer looking a bit concerned makes me concerned, so good job on successfully hooking me to the next chapter! :P

A really awesome first chapter!

Laura xxx

Author's Response: No worries at all! Your reviews were so amazing which absolutely made up for it ;) The reason it's taken me so long to respond to these is just because they're so kind and thoughtful and I don't know how to convey my gratitude in a coherent way (if I'd responded when I first read this it would've been something like "asdkjfjkjaaa??!!!?")

I am so glad you thought Regulus was relatable, and that you liked him and were irritated by him at the same time. He really is such an interesting character with so much potential - there were a lot of holes in his story in the books which left it open for a lot of interpretation here. I'm so thrilled you like my portrayal of him!

Aah, yes - it's great to hear that you liked the friendship aspect. I really couldn't have seen this being a love story, and there are too few stories out there that are just about friends! I'm so glad it feels like a good pace and that Regulus' world is built up appropriately.

Wow, thank you! (hehe, I'm a big fan of exclamation marks too :P) It's really wonderful to hear that you liked the balance of the serious issues and the silly things, and that they seem like normal teenagers because of it.

Ooh, that's a great way of phrasing it about Regulus - like his heart knows where he stands, but his mind doesn't.

Thank you so much for this incredible review!! ♥

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