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Review #1, by RiahPilling<3 Fifth Year

13th June 2014:
This truly is amazing, I love that Oscar has come out. I also love the time gap you put it, it's very clever and not alot of writers can pull it off but you definitely managed it. I eagerly hope for more from you :3

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I wasn't sure how people would respond to how I write, but I'm glad you're liking it. Not, sure when I'll get around to writing more, as I have exams at the moment, but there should be more up, hopefully soon.

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Review #2, by FriendofMolly September 1st 2015 Harry

20th April 2014:
bibliophiliac,
Wow! I usually stick to post Battle stories. But something in the description caught my eye. I am so very glad I did. Though I did wish that this first chapter had been longer. I am very anxious to see what will follow. I do have a couple of questions. If Harry and Dudley are as close as you portray them here, how is it that Harry didn't know his nephew was a Wizard? You wrote Harry was responsible for Dudley's daughter a job with the Muggle PM, does that mean that Dudley named his daughter after his Mum? Or is the Petunia working for the PM actually Harry's Aunt? You write rather well, I did see one misspell, you wrote morn (Harry thinking of Teddy's parents) I think you meant mourn, Otherwise, Keep writing and post soon!
FoM

Author's Response: Thanks very much.
In my original draft of this chapter I did have down that Harry and Dudley's family only see each other at Christmas, so Dudley's son could have not shown his powers yet (like Neville, who's powers only started to show a few months before Hogwarts). I had forgotten I'd cut that line, sorry.
Petunia in this story is Dudley's Daughter. His character was so spoilt by his Mother that I figured he would have named his Daughter after her.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, it means a lot.


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