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Review #1, by ScoroseOTP The Sortings

3rd June 2014:
OH MY MERLIN!
YOUR BACK! YOU BOUGHT IT BACK!
THEIR BACK! ALL OF THEM! ALSY IN THE MAKING RIGHT HERE!
KEEP GOING PLEASE! I WILL KEEP MY EYES OUT FOR MORE AND WILL BE EXPECTING THEM NOW YOU'VE PUT THIS UP!
Sorry... I just got really excited there... This is amazing though!
I love it! A collection of short stories of them before and during bulldozer is great! Make sure you do one with Al and Scorpius' relationship! I'm still incredibly intrigued with that! And Lily!
I can't wait! AHHH!
Thanks for coming back! I only just noticed but I will now check more often now!

ScoroseOTP
Emz xxx

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Review #2, by UnluckyStar57 The Sortings

16th April 2014:
Hi! I've never read Bulldozer--shame on me!! This little chapter has convinced me that I should probably find time to do that in the future. :)

I love how you wrote little snippets of each character and the Sorting Hat's thoughts about them. It was fast-paced without being too quick, and it set up a good background without being too wordy. In short, it was fairly brilliant. :)

Aw, Albus got into Gryffindor because he was thinking about Kasy--am I right in thinking that? I wonder how they met on the platform and what took place for him to earn the nickname "Bulldozer?" I guess I'll have to read and find out, won't I?!

Rebecca wanted to be with Kasy, but obviously the Sorting Hat thought otherwise. I wonder how the twins are different and how the Sorting Hat knew that Rebecca wouldn't be a good fit for Gryffindor. She seems to be okay with the slightly more formal atmosphere that her emerald-clad comrades put off, so she'll hopefully do well in the house of the serpents. But is she an antagonist in the story? I wonder...

This is a really fantastic first chapter!

~UnluckyStar57

For the Huffleclaw-Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza.

Author's Response: Pre-read is definitely going to helpful ;) Thanks for the review, and glad you liked it! :)

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