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Review #1, by cherry_pop94 1- Intelligence

27th May 2015:
Hi there!

I've been meaning to read your stories for ages now and I'm so glad I've finally got the time now that the Ravenclaw Diadems are over!

This has a really great start. I love that this is about Umbridge, I mean, who doesn't hate Umbridge, right? And it's great that Harry, Ron, and Neville are a team. I think the three of them have got such great chemistry and that has really shown in the short interactions they had here. They seem like such a fun team too!

The opening of this chapter was really strong and Harry was the perfect snarky, sassy person we met in JK's books. Though I admit, it felt like a set up from the beginning, so I wasn't really surprised when Neville and Ron showed up.

I think this holds a lot of promise though and I'm very excited to see where you take this!

Down with Umbridge, hurruh!

-Stefi

Author's Response: Hey!

Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you like it, I'm hoping to get back to this story once my main fic is finished as I had a different climax when I posted the chapt to the one I have penned out now.

Thanks again for the review!
:)


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Review #2, by UnluckyStar57 1- Intelligence

16th April 2014:
WOW, that was so cool! :D

This chapter has very few words in it, but OH MY GOSH, when Dugson and Reek transformed, I got really excited! That's such an awesome plot twist for the very first chapter!! I think that you've established the story really well here, with Harry being rather snarky indeed and having Neville and Ron to back him up! The fact that they discovered that Umbridge is still around only adds suspense to the chapter and makes me want to read more! I hope you update soon!

Your writing style is very action-packed and concise. I like it a lot! I also like that your writing is rather free of grammatical and spelling errors--because I sort of dislike those a lot. :) So I think that this story idea is brilliant, and I hope to read more soon!

~UnluckyStar57

For the Huffleclaw-Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza.

Author's Response: Thank you soo much! You have no idea how much these kind of reviews mean to me! :D
I'm working on the second chapter as we speak and you've got me all nervous that it's got to meet such expectations :P

Thanks again for your kind comments,

SiriusAura92 :)


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Review #3, by Veritaserum27 1- Intelligence

16th April 2014:
Hello!

I saw this on the recently added stories and thought I would give it a go. I think you have a nice start here. there is a great twist at the end - I never would have thought that it was Ron and Neville disguised with poly juice potion.

Also, you've given the reader enought interest to want to continue reading. "Mate, I've found her." What a great ending! I want to know who she is and why they are excited that they found her!

Great start!

Beth (Veritaserum27)

Reviewed for Huffleclaw/Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza

Author's Response: Thank you for your amazing review! I'm so glad you liked it! :D



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Review #4, by luvinpadfoot 1- Intelligence

3rd April 2014:
Ooh I'm really enjoying the beginning of this! All the intrigue. And it's just like Harry to mouth off and get himself hit a few times. Silly boy. I can't wait to see where you're going with this story! I love it so far and am looking forward to the rest of it! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!
Haha, yeh, I think people can forget that Harry can be quite mouthy sometimes.
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