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Review #1, by UnluckyStar57 1- Intelligence

16th April 2014:
WOW, that was so cool! :D

This chapter has very few words in it, but OH MY GOSH, when Dugson and Reek transformed, I got really excited! That's such an awesome plot twist for the very first chapter!! I think that you've established the story really well here, with Harry being rather snarky indeed and having Neville and Ron to back him up! The fact that they discovered that Umbridge is still around only adds suspense to the chapter and makes me want to read more! I hope you update soon!

Your writing style is very action-packed and concise. I like it a lot! I also like that your writing is rather free of grammatical and spelling errors--because I sort of dislike those a lot. :) So I think that this story idea is brilliant, and I hope to read more soon!


For the Huffleclaw-Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza.

Author's Response: Thank you soo much! You have no idea how much these kind of reviews mean to me! :D
I'm working on the second chapter as we speak and you've got me all nervous that it's got to meet such expectations :P

Thanks again for your kind comments,

SiriusAura92 :)

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Review #2, by Veritaserum27 1- Intelligence

16th April 2014:

I saw this on the recently added stories and thought I would give it a go. I think you have a nice start here. there is a great twist at the end - I never would have thought that it was Ron and Neville disguised with poly juice potion.

Also, you've given the reader enought interest to want to continue reading. "Mate, I've found her." What a great ending! I want to know who she is and why they are excited that they found her!

Great start!

Beth (Veritaserum27)

Reviewed for Huffleclaw/Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza

Author's Response: Thank you for your amazing review! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

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Review #3, by luvinpadfoot 1- Intelligence

3rd April 2014:
Ooh I'm really enjoying the beginning of this! All the intrigue. And it's just like Harry to mouth off and get himself hit a few times. Silly boy. I can't wait to see where you're going with this story! I love it so far and am looking forward to the rest of it! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!
Haha, yeh, I think people can forget that Harry can be quite mouthy sometimes.

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