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Review #1, by Gladis Gudgeon just say yes

29th August 2014:
Everything was great, characterization, description, emotion, pacing. I really loved this story. The emotion was trully felt. It just needs a little bit more description. 9/10

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Review #2, by Infinityx just say yes

17th April 2014:
This was such a tragic, heartbreaking story! :( This is the first fic I've read that's centered around Narcissa, and to think that once upon a time she had loved another girl, but let go of her to perform her's just so sad!

I really like the way you've written this story. Bringing in Andromeda was a nice touch, and you've portrayed the deep regret that Narcissa felt extremely well. The way you ended it was so powerful, so heart wrenching. I was incredibly touched by this story. Great work!


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