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Review #1, by maryhead I.

19th April 2014:
Hi!

What a wonderful, wonderful beginning! I never read a fan fiction set in the Founders' era, but this seems to be really good!

I think that the best elements of this chapter are the descriptions. I am a very "visual" sort of person and tend to create a mental film out of the things I read... Sometimes I have some difficulty, because the author isn't detailed enough... But you, my dear, did a wonderful job! I could almost touch the dress and smell the air of Middle Age England (if the story is set during the Middle Age, that is ;)).

And then the scene in the carriage... That was really good! I love the way you describe Helga's feelings towards magic and the fact you mentioned the persecution of witches and wizards in the story. Helga is a good character, a bit naive as it should be expected by a girl of her age, but also strong enough to learn how to use magic on her own.

I can't wait to see the next chapter, and I hope to read something more about Godric soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you my dear! I am so glad you liked it! I was so worried that Helga would come off as too naive and not a strong character at all, so I am so happy you saw her as she is and how she has the potential to grow. And yes, much more of Godric will be coming in the next chapters :).
xoxo


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Review #2, by chandler_bing I.

19th March 2014:
Really love this story!! I really enjoy reading founders stories but there are so few of them around so I am so happy that you decided to write one! I can't wait for you to update, please do it soon!! :)

Author's Response: Ahhh! My first review on this story!!! Thank you so much!! Hopefully the next chapter take too long to write!
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