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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by DominiqueWeasleyRules Chapter 1: Oh the humanity!

13th August 2014:
Oh my gosh, Penny is extremely cute! And I need to know more about that Sophia. Continue, pleassse!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! And I've got plans for Penny and Sophia to attempt to rid all the adults of the remains of their sanity. There in theory should be a new chappie by the end of the month

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Review #2, by DominiqueWeasleyRules Prologue: And so it begins

13th August 2014:
I already love this!

Author's Response: Woop Woop! I'm positively tickled that you love it!

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Review #3, by UnluckyStar57 Prologue: And so it begins

16th April 2014:
Hahahahaha, this is a brief intro, but it's packed with funny gems!

I love the caricature that is Wally Gardiner. He seems to be certifiably insane, and I can't wait to meet him in later chapters. What is he working on that requires such random ingredients: a knowledge of Assyrian runes, billywigs, gurdyroots, et cetera? It all seems very random, but then again, nothing is ever random, is it? This will definitely amount to something--but what?!

Dominique, for her part, is fairly awesome. It's cool that she loves her job, even though her boss is crazy. I can't wait to learn more about her as the story progresses! Also, the rules of the Department made me giggle. :D

One grammar mistake: you said "bowls of the Department" when I think you meant "bowels of the Department." One measly vowel and the whole word changes! :P But that was the only odd thing that I saw.

Great intro!


For the Huffleclaw-Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far, I wish I could say another chapter is coming up but my job isn't allowing for a lot of writing to happen.

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Review #4, by MyMyMiss Prologue: And so it begins

18th March 2014:
whoa, like Dom Weasley - working as a researcher or for one I should say lol that's unreal, must take after her Auntie lol.

You really set the scene nicely with the story! I love how you portrayed Dom as different, generally the main characters of Next Gen fics that I read are all about the girls/guys being the super one's the ones that can do no wrong, and this one Dom admits to being slightly odd, almost saying that she knows she's not perfect! And I like that about this story!

I really think you have a lot of potential here with this, and I can't wait for an update! Keep up the good work hun (:



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yep, I wanted to make sure that Dom wasn't a perfect person (Actually in this story, all of Bill's kids are super nerdy in some ways)

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