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Review #1, by adluvshp Scars

17th March 2014:
Blackout Battle 9/10

Aw, this was sad but beautiful. I liked how you wrote Hermione. It made sense that she "couldn't let go" of the mudblood scar. It was also understandable that Ron just couldn't get it and wanted her to let it go. However, I am glad he decided to accept her with it either way (though I am not a Ron/Hermione shipper) in the end.

Hermione's pain was well written too. It was depicted in a realistic way and not too overdone. It was also awesome how Hermione regarded the scar as a souvenir, as a mark of their survival. It was very powerful and effective.

All in all, this was beautifully written. The plot concept itself was brilliant as I never gave much thought to the "mudblood" scar but you've captured what it'd have meant to Hermione very well here. Great job!

--AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to write it because I realised that there wasn't much of a thing about her torture in the aftermath of it, and it seemed sort of wrong to just let it go. Thanks for the lovely review- I'm glad you liked it! :)

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